Reviews by Threem
PONDEROSA PACHYDERM by Patina Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary: A What Happened Next For Old Sheba.
Categories: What Happens Next? Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4284 Read Count: 146
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Ponderosa Pachyderm Reviewer: Threem Signed
Ha!  I loved this!  What a different take on a WHN....patina, you've got a great sense of humor!  Keep it up, girl!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Threem!  This story was a whole lotta fun to write!!  I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it.
Date: 09/28/2008
With This Ring by Patina Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary: FeatureA short story about a wedding.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1156 Read Count: 257
Published: 06/22/2008 Updated: 06/22/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: With This Ring Reviewer: Threem Signed

"Joe felt that women would always be a mysery''....so, that's what he was doing all those years, trying to solve a mystery!

This was very good, short and sweet and left you wondering to the end who the 'involved' parties are!



Author's Response:

LOL, Threem!  I'm glad to know you enjoyed this story and that I "gotcha" with the ending.

Date: 09/30/2008
Summary: Adam suffers amnesia and is picked up by unsavory characters. Will his family be able to find him in time?
Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10863 Read Count: 351
Published: 07/03/2008 Updated: 07/03/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Threem Signed

Excellent!!  You are very good at writing action, Deb, and your attention to detail is superb.....I felt like I was right there!  Very interesting subject; Adam w/amnesia, 'forced' into a life of crime!

Enjoyed it immensely!



Author's Response: What a lovely review Threem, thank you!  I'm very glad you enjoyed it, and what better compliment than for you to feel you were actually there.  Thank you so much!! :)
Date: 09/24/2008
A Mouthful of Regret by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Adam's second round-up following his return home from college.  He and Joe aren't getting along but a brutal bear attack changes everything.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5746 Read Count: 820
Published: 07/16/2008 Updated: 07/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Mouthful of Regret Reviewer: Threem Signed

Really enjoyed this, patina!  What a wonderful story of the 'younger' Cartwright boys- 

Your stories make it easy to picture the scenes, and what the characters looked like-

Excellent!



Author's Response: Thank you, Threem!  I'm so pleased to know you could "see" this story unfolding.
Date: 09/23/2008
Summary: Adam meets a young lady from back east and romance ensues.
Categories: Romance Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright, Sheriff Roy Coffee
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 45092 Read Count: 2442
Published: 07/16/2008 Updated: 07/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 46 - 47 Reviewer: Threem Signed

Girl, you are one awesome writer!  I've been reading this by bits and pieces and it is very good!  The type of woman I would certainly pick to write about with Adam!

Great story!



Author's Response:

Coming from you, I am flattered!  Thank you.

Date: 09/25/2008
A Gift Horse by Patina Rated: G starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary: This is the fourth story in The Battle of Wills series. Ben announces at supper that he is going to buy a horse for Marie. Adam becomes unhappy because Ben had promised to buy him a horse before leaving for New Orleans. Will this situation cause another rift between Marie and Adam?
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: The Battle of Wills
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2452 Read Count: 388
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 02/06/2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Gift Horse Reviewer: Threem Signed

This was a fun read!  I can just picture young Adam, 'pouting' because he thought he'd been 'forgotten'.  And Marie, being a mother could see right through him-

Absolutely delightful!

Date: 10/02/2008
A Tangled Web by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

A What Happened Instead story for The Lady From Baltimore. Deborah Banning's scheme to marry her daughter to a Cartwright had come to fruition when Joe proposed to Melinda. But Melinda was in love with Adam. What if Melinda decided to have Adam, no matter the cost?


Categories: What Happens Instead?, Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9583 Read Count: 388
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Tangled Web Reviewer: Threem Signed
I really like this version!  It is believable, and I can picture it as it happens.......really well written!

Author's Response: Thank you, Threem!  I'm pleased to know you could "see" this story and that the plotline is believable.  Those darned Banning women!
Date: 09/30/2008
Summary: Marie Cartwright is sick with a chest cold. Three year old Little Joe discovers her cough syrup.
Categories: Comedy, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2682 Read Count: 236
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Spoonful of Medicine Reviewer: Threem Signed
Another good one!  Cute story, and again, I can picture everything so clearly!

Author's Response: Thank you, Threem!  I'm pleased to know you could see little Little Joe tasting the medicine and feeling its after effects.
Date: 10/23/2008
Summary: After telling four year old Little Joe about the balls held during Mardi Gras, Marie dreams of a dance held in the future. How has life turned out for the Cartwrights? Did Adam, Hoss, and Joe turn out to be the men we know?
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3621 Read Count: 228
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Glimpse Into the Future Reviewer: Threem Signed
Wow, that dream was intense......very vivid.  I really like your stories that deal with Marie!

Author's Response: Thank you, Threem!  Thank goodness Joe's future didn't come to be.  I'm pleased to know you like my version of Marie and how she fit into the Cartwright household. 
Date: 10/23/2008
Love is Blind by Cowgirl8 Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary: Jenny Cartwright finds true love when she helps a blind man. I know it's a sorry summary... Part 1 in the "Jenny & David" series. CAUTION: Introduces two non-canon characters!
Categories: Drama, Romance Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 25977 Read Count: 176
Published: 07/19/2008 Updated: 10/05/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wait For Me Reviewer: Threem Signed
What a cute story.......really different, I liked it!  Hope to read more!

Author's Response: Thank You! cinderella88 and i are working on the next part currently
Date: 10/08/2008
Summary: Adam is accidentally beamed on the starship Enterprise lead by the famous Captain Kirk
Categories: Action/Adventure, Future Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9610 Read Count: 186
Published: 07/20/2008 Updated: 07/20/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Threem Signed

You must be a true 'Trekkie' to write this!  I can picture every scene and it is sooo lifelike.....

This would have made a good episode of 'Star Trek' IMO!!

 Very good, I thorougly enjoyed it!

Date: 09/28/2008
Cruel Calculation by Cowgirl Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]
Summary: Adam helps an old friend and discovers a secret which could change his life forever.
Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4961 Read Count: 442
Published: 08/13/2008 Updated: 08/13/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Threem Signed

Wow....what a story.......I've never read anything quite like it!  You've done a very good job; I like the poem at the first, very touching.

A different kind of storyline here, one I've not seen before.....and I liked it very much!



Author's Response: Threem, thank you so much for that wonderful review. 
Date: 09/24/2008
Summary: This is a story that I wrote for my english class. My teacher really liked it. It's about the boy's while Ben is out of Town. There is foreshadowing. And we weren't supposed to have blood and Gore so nothing gruesome in this story. Any spelling or grammer errors are my fault.
Categories: Drama, Comedy Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1452 Read Count: 146
Published: 08/29/2008 Updated: 08/29/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Threem Signed

Very good!  Reminded me kinda of 'The Hay Burner' - Ha!

Keep up the good work!



Author's Response: Thank You! your right it kinda is like the hayburner! lol
Date: 09/30/2008
Summary: Adam Carwright lends a helping hand to a talented but very self-conscious girl. NOTE: I do not own Bonanza or any of it's characters. All poems used in this fanfic are taken from the book "Poems That Touch The Heart" and all poems belong to their legal and rightful owners.
Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7905 Read Count: 594
Published: 10/15/2008 Updated: 10/15/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Threem Signed
Awesome!  I like the 'mixing in' of the poetry....really adds something special to the story!

Author's Response: Hello, Threem! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I'm happy that you liked it!
Date: 10/23/2008