Reviews by Bertha
Devil's Bargain by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

WHI for Death at Dawn.


Categories: What Happens Instead?, Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5702 Read Count: 313
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Devil's Bargain Reviewer: Bertha Signed
good story, thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know, Bertha.
Date: 10/08/2008
My Beloved Child by Cowgirl Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

Adam has been shot and is fighting for his life. While Ben and the boys fearing the worst, the eldest son of the Cartwrights receives unexpected help.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5028 Read Count: 456
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed
I enjoyed the story, thanks

Author's Response: Thanks for reading Bertha
Date: 10/08/2008
Summary: Adam Carwright lends a helping hand to a talented but very self-conscious girl. NOTE: I do not own Bonanza or any of it's characters. All poems used in this fanfic are taken from the book "Poems That Touch The Heart" and all poems belong to their legal and rightful owners.
Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7905 Read Count: 594
Published: 10/15/2008 Updated: 10/15/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Bertha Signed
I enjoyed the story, thanks

Author's Response: Thank you!
Date: 10/15/2008
Summary: A new friend of Joe's battles prejudice. WARNING: This story contains a somewhat graphic death.
Categories: Action/Adventure, Drama Characters: Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5127 Read Count: 1163
Published: 10/16/2008 Updated: 10/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Bertha Signed
good story, thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)
Date: 10/16/2008
Summary: After a long day of repairing fences, Adam, Hoss, and Joe decide to spend the night by the lake and enjoy some popcorn.
Categories: Comedy Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1642 Read Count: 136
Published: 10/18/2008 Updated: 10/18/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Passing Time and Popping Corn Reviewer: Bertha Signed
I enjoyed the story, thanks

Author's Response: Thank you for letting me know, Bertha.
Date: 10/18/2008
The Cartwrights of Camelot by Cinderella88 Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 22]
Summary: After reading King Arthur & the Knights of the Round Table, Joe has one crazy dream...
Categories: Action/Adventure Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1147 Read Count: 98
Published: 11/09/2008 Updated: 11/09/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Cartwrights of Camelot Reviewer: Bertha Signed
fun story, thanks

Author's Response: Thank you, Bertha!
Date: 11/09/2008
The Birthday Wish by pony Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary: It's Joe's birthday, and he's making a wish. But the Cartwrights don't realize it's someone else's birthday too ... and he has a secret wish of his own.
Categories: Mystery, Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3150 Read Count: 215
Published: 11/14/2008 Updated: 11/14/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed
good story, thanks

Author's Response: Thanks for reading, Bertha!
Date: 11/14/2008
A Light in the Darkness by pony Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 48]
Summary: Adam Cartwright is coming home ... but the path is dark and lonely. Will there be a light at the end of the road?
Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1294 Read Count: 434
Published: 11/27/2008 Updated: 11/27/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed
good story, thanks

Author's Response: Thank you, Bertha! I'm glad you enjoyed "A Light in the Darkness."
Date: 11/28/2008
Shelter by pony Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Adam and Joe Cartwright are lost in a blizzard. Their only hope ... shelter.
Categories: Drama Characters: Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1340 Read Count: 300
Published: 12/11/2008 Updated: 12/11/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed
good story, do they make it home, hint hint, thanks

Author's Response: LOL! That little story is actually an excerpt from a longer (unpublished) story, Bertha. Yes, they do make it home safely ... That's the beauty of Bonanza, always a happy ending!
Date: 12/11/2008
Greater Love: Promises Kept by pony Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 36]
Summary: Hoss and Adam each make a promise on the night their brother Joe is born. But nobody can imagine how those promises will one day be kept …
Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7014 Read Count: 345
Published: 12/16/2008 Updated: 12/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed
excellent story, thanks

Author's Response: Thank you, Bertha. I'm glad you enjoyed "Greater Love."
Date: 12/16/2008
Summary:

Adam and Hoss are lost and must make their own way home on different paths.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14666 Read Count: 159
Published: 02/06/2009 Updated: 02/06/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

excellent story, thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  It was great fun to write.

Date: 02/10/2009
Summary:

WHIB for She Walks in Beauty. After Regan Miller's kiss, Adam realizes he has a decision to make since Hoss plans to marry her. As he ponders his course of action, his thoughts turn to another scandalous woman--his step-mother, Marie.


Categories: What Happens In-Between?, Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1634 Read Count: 199
Published: 03/01/2009 Updated: 03/01/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Woman Cloaked in Scandal Reviewer: Bertha Signed

good story, often wondered what Adam would do if Hoss hadn't jumped him first, thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bertha.  Hoss leapt to the wrong conclusion without an explanation.  I'm glad to know you enjoyed this story.

Date: 03/02/2009
Summary:

Adam faces what may be the most terrifying moment of his life.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are property of their respective owners.  The original characters and plot are property of the author.   The author is not in any way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise, and makes no money from this work.     No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 814 Read Count: 235
Published: 05/21/2009 Updated: 05/21/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

thought I had read this before, hope it continues, thanks



Author's Response:

Bertha, thank you for your feedback.  I'm glad you enjoyed the story once again.  I have other completed stories I'll be posting soon, some with Adam, his wife, and their children.

Date: 05/21/2009
Summary:

All Adam wanted was a quiet evening at home to mark his birthday. Was that too much to ask?


Categories: Comedy Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4913 Read Count: 226
Published: 05/30/2009 Updated: 05/30/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Wisdom Comes With Age Reviewer: Bertha Signed

loved it, thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know, Bertha.

Date: 05/30/2009
World's Best Pa by K-9mom Rated: PG starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

It's the night before Father's Day and Adam shares memories of his father's sacrifices with his younger brothers. There's also an added suprise!


Categories: All Genres Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 6836 Read Count: 306
Published: 06/01/2009 Updated: 06/01/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

loved it, thanks

Date: 06/02/2009
The Fire and The Night by pony Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Tempers flare as Joe and Adam find themselves in conflict ... but then discover an unexpected harmony.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1206 Read Count: 366
Published: 06/03/2009 Updated: 06/03/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

are you going to let us know what IT is? I hope so, thanks



Author's Response:

LOL ... Joe and Adam both realized that 'IT' doesn't really matter!

Date: 06/03/2009
Summary:

A certain Cartwright must find within him the wherewithal to face his greatest fear.   The life of another may well depend on it.

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are property of their respective owners.  The original characters and plot are property of the author.   The author is not in any way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise, and makes no money from this work.     No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Drama Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2351 Read Count: 168
Published: 06/09/2009 Updated: 06/09/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

and here I thought it would be Joe, good story, thanks



Author's Response:

... and thank YOU, Bertha, for your feedback and for your cimpliments.  I appreciate hearing from you and I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Kathleen/pkmoonshine

Date: 06/09/2009
by Rated: [Reviews - ]
Summary:
Categories: Orphan Characters: None
Series: None
Chapters: 0 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 0 Read Count: 0
Published: 12/31/1969 Updated: 12/31/1969 [Report This]
Title: None Reviewer: Bertha Signed

can't wait to find out what happened

Date: 06/10/2009
Obsession by Terina Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 132]
Summary:

Adam is missing under mysterious circumstances.  Will his family find him in time?

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Mystery Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6509 Read Count: 3716
Published: 06/15/2009 Updated: 06/15/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 25-28 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

enjoyed the story very much, thanks



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Thanks for reading.

Date: 06/16/2009
No More Games by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

When Adam realizes he's in the act of killing Peter Kane, he's horrified that he's finally lost control and proved his tormentor right. As he makes his escape, he's reminded that two men left him in the desert to die, too. Just who is the better man?


Categories: Drama, What Happens Next? Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3308 Read Count: 131
Published: 06/25/2009 Updated: 06/25/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: No More Games Reviewer: Bertha Signed

very good, thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bertha.

Date: 06/26/2009
Summary:

A routine day of rounding up strays turns into a comedy of errors.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Comedy Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1667 Read Count: 191
Published: 06/27/2009 Updated: 06/27/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

loved it, fun, thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks Bertha, I'm glad you liked it.

Date: 06/27/2009
Something So Small by Deb Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Something's bothering Adam on his birthday, and Little Joe just may be able to help him...


Categories: Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1692 Read Count: 322
Published: 08/03/2009 Updated: 08/03/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

very good, touching story, thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks so much, Bertha!  ~ Debbie

Date: 08/03/2009
The Vacation by Tracy Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 145]
Summary: Feature

The daughter of an old friend visits the Ponderosa. Something wonderful happens, and she must decide whether to leave or stay.

 

All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: All Genres Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 59633 Read Count: 2397
Published: 12/18/2009 Updated: 12/18/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

thought I had read this before, good story, thanks



Author's Response:

Thanks, Bertha. Glad you enjoyed the story.

Date: 12/18/2009
The Outlaws by Krystyna Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

This story takes us to Eagle Station and introduces us to a much younger Roy Coffee, and shows us the determination of a ten year old little boy doing his utmost to protect his little brother from The Outlaws.


Categories: Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Sheriff Roy Coffee
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14974 Read Count: 228
Published: 12/21/2009 Updated: 12/21/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

I loved it, thanks



Author's Response:

I really appreciated this review, Bertha, many thanks indeed.

Date: 12/21/2009
Summary:

A WHN for The Hayburner. Hoss tells what Adam did to him after finding out about him winning money on Joe's horse.


Categories: Comedy, What Happens Next? Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1130 Read Count: 229
Published: 02/26/2010 Updated: 02/26/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: No More Security Reviewer: Bertha Signed

fun story, thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you, Bertha.

Date: 02/27/2010