Reviews by Frannie
Sunset on the Ponderosa by pony Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

We all know the Cartwrights will live forever in our hearts. This is the simple story of how they reached that destiny.


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6895 Read Count: 983
Published: 04/07/2008 Updated: 04/07/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

I LOVED this from beginning to end! I could easily see the boys riding off into the sunset as the last of them left this Earth!

 

Great job! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Frannie! I really appreciate this lovely review!

Date: 08/28/2011
A Mouthful of Regret by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Adam's second round-up following his return home from college.  He and Joe aren't getting along but a brutal bear attack changes everything.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5746 Read Count: 826
Published: 07/16/2008 Updated: 07/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Mouthful of Regret Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Amen! Yup, Ben Cartwright was definitely the wealthiest man on Earth!

I loved that. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Frannie.  Material possessions can't compare to the love of a family.  I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this story.

Date: 02/29/2012
Summary: The 12th story in the Battle of Wills series. Hoss wants to learn how to be a good older brother to his new sibling.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: The Battle of Wills
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2282 Read Count: 205
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Big Brother Lessons Reviewer: Frannie Signed

I loved that! I can easily see them doing that for Joe when he was a baby! *nods*



Author's Response:

Thank you, Frannie!  

Date: 11/25/2012
Summary: Joe makes a resolution to stay out of trouble. Hoss and Adam are determined to help him break it. How long can Joe last?
Categories: Comedy, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4105 Read Count: 290
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A New Year, A New Resolution Reviewer: Frannie Signed

LOL! Nice ending! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you, Frannie! 

Date: 03/04/2012
A Good Horse by Deb Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Adam is forced to decide whether or not to put down the horse that saved his life... *Written in response to a Fanfic Exchange*


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2375 Read Count: 199
Published: 04/17/2009 Updated: 04/17/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

The conversation between the brothers was perfect! I loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Frannie!  I'm glad you liked it. ~Debbie 

Date: 07/27/2012
A Word to the Wise by Deb Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

A simple conversation takes place in a saloon on the eve of a special day.


Categories: Holiday, Future Characters: Adam Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1666 Read Count: 371
Published: 12/28/2009 Updated: 12/28/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

LOVED it! I can easily see how Adam could come back to the ranch that way. GREAT job! :)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, Frannie!  I'm glad you liked my take on his return. :) ~ Deb

Date: 01/29/2012
Summary:

A WHN for The Hayburner. Hoss tells what Adam did to him after finding out about him winning money on Joe's horse.


Categories: Comedy, What Happens Next? Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1130 Read Count: 229
Published: 02/26/2010 Updated: 02/26/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: No More Security Reviewer: Frannie Signed

LOL! That was cute! Man, I could easily see Adam doing that to Hoss!

Date: 02/26/2012
Wanna Go Fishing? by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstar [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

Adam and Hoss decide to disobey Pa and go fishing.


Categories: Comedy Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2006 Read Count: 186
Published: 09/03/2010 Updated: 09/03/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Lol! Leave it to Adam to come up with an excuse like that! ;)

Great job!

Date: 02/06/2012
Great Minds by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

It's Christmas time on the Ponderosa and the family is ready to exchange gifts.


Categories: Comedy, Holiday Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2341 Read Count: 92
Published: 12/13/2010 Updated: 12/13/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Hehe, LOVED it! Put a smile on my face. ;)

Date: 12/20/2011
First Impressions by praterfarms1 Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 24]
Summary:

Shelly has a game that she plays when she meets someone new, First Impression, and she just met the Cartwrights.  Wonder if she is right? 

*this is the 1st story in what will be a series. (I hope!)


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1327 Read Count: 143
Published: 12/31/2010 Updated: 12/31/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Loved it!!!

And she described our Hoss to a tee!!! ;)

Date: 05/20/2012
True to Their Word by praterfarms1 Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

The Cartwrights Help out a new neighbor.  This is story uses characters introduced in my story First Impressions, how ever it is a stand alone story. It is the second in a series.


Categories: Comedy, Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3345 Read Count: 155
Published: 01/01/2011 Updated: 01/01/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Now that put a *huge* smile on my face!

Ya done did it again! *Great* work on describing the Cs, PF! Each one is exactly how I pictured them! ;)))

Date: 05/28/2012
Summary:

Hoss has a steady girl. A girl that he loves. What is it from his past that is holding him back?

This is the follow up to THE CHOICE and the 4th in the series of Shelly Hunter and the Cartwrights.


Categories: Drama, Romance Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12542 Read Count: 868
Published: 04/08/2011 Updated: 04/08/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Hehe, I'm smiling! I like it! :)

 

Date: 03/01/2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

He's right! He *is* the one with a steady girl! ;)

Love the banter with the brothers!

Date: 03/01/2012
Mona Lisa by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

A famous painting, a beautiful girl, and a lost memory renuite a man with his family.


Categories: Drama, Romance, Future Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6184 Read Count: 68
Published: 04/11/2011 Updated: 04/11/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Wow...just...wow.

I never expected he would still be alive.

I love how you got the Cs personalities just nright! ;)

Date: 05/31/2012
Come Hell or High Water by pbeaking Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

This story highlights what happens when you have a friendly game between three brothers, two not so bright criminals, a heaping amount of missing chicken, and a desire to use word association to your best advantage.

 


Categories: Comedy Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 11752 Read Count: 189
Published: 04/23/2011 Updated: 04/23/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Come Hell or High Water Reviewer: Frannie Signed

LOVED it! Nice to see Hoss get one over on his brothers! ;)



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really had fun writing the dialog between brothers in this one.

Date: 02/03/2012
The Christmas Gift by pbeaking Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Ben’s granddaughter, Lizzy gives her grandfather a special Christmas gift. This story touches upon the importance of family, remembering those who have passed and those that cannot be with us. Just a short story for the Holiday Season. Enjoy!


Categories: Holiday Characters: Ben Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1736 Read Count: 76
Published: 04/25/2011 Updated: 04/25/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Christmas Gift Reviewer: Frannie Signed

That gave me tears. Beautiful, just beautiful.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

Date: 01/29/2012
All But One Sense by pbeaking Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstar [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Joe is coming of age and is becoming quite the ladies man. This is just a short story of how Adam and Hoss tamed the wild beast within, but knowing Joe, it certainly won’t be for long. It’s a short story, but comes from the heart. It was written when I lost my sister to cancer and needed a good laugh.


Categories: Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1628 Read Count: 252
Published: 05/01/2011 Updated: 05/01/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: All But One Sense Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Okay that made me giggle! Loved it! :)



Author's Response:

Thank You! I appreciate the feedback.

Date: 02/05/2013
Cookie! by No1butjoe Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

All Hoss wanted was a cookie.


Categories: Comedy Characters: Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1237 Read Count: 57
Published: 05/07/2011 Updated: 05/07/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Cookie! Reviewer: Frannie Signed

LOL! That is something I can see happening. Nice!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Date: 12/20/2011
PAST AND FUTURE by praterfarms1 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

 This is the 5th in the Shelly Hunter and the Cartwrights series.

A part of Hoss' past threatens his relationship with the woman he loves.


Categories: Drama, Romance Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5806 Read Count: 433
Published: 05/15/2011 Updated: 05/15/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

I *loved* that, PF!

Such a nice ending! I can easily see Hoss in that situation!

*Great* job! :)

Date: 02/22/2012
Ghost Hunters by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Do ghosts exist?  Well, Little Joe is about to find out and Adam and Hoss are ready to teach him a lesson.


Categories: Action/Adventure, Comedy Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3230 Read Count: 144
Published: 05/20/2011 Updated: 05/20/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

I didn't expect it to end that way, that's for sure!

*Loved* it!

Date: 02/23/2012
Summary:

When an epidemic of Chickenpox and the Measels strikes, No one on the Ponderosa is safe, especially Joe....


Categories: Action/Adventure, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5957 Read Count: 321
Published: 06/06/2011 Updated: 06/06/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

That was perfect! Hoss, Adam, Joe, Ben. All of them were just as I could picture them if they all got sick at the same time! :)

Date: 02/26/2012
Tea Party by idmarryhoss Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

A tea party with next generations and some grandparenting. Few minutes stolen from the ordinary day...


Categories: Comedy, Drama, Sequel Characters: Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1507 Read Count: 141
Published: 06/15/2011 Updated: 06/15/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Etude Op. 3 #1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

That made me smile. Nice job! :)

I wish we could have seen the boys with their families. *nods*

Date: 02/06/2012
Just How You Feel by AdamsBaby Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

Written as an early Father's Day present to Hoss/Dan Blocker... a true gift reaches the heart. Sometimes it's just how you feel that makes it special.


Categories: Drama, Comedy Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2144 Read Count: 85
Published: 06/16/2011 Updated: 06/16/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

What a way to honour a special man.

I love how you have him a son; Hoss/Dan with kids always maekes me smile. And yup, I cried too. :)

Loved it!

Date: 02/29/2012
Summary:

Another good reason to fall in love with Hoss? His good marriage qualities? A dialogue of two minds a bit unorthodox, in the hazy night of advancing years and their effects.


Categories: Drama, Romance Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1866 Read Count: 92
Published: 07/05/2011 Updated: 07/05/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: No Cricket Reviewer: Frannie Signed

For some reason, I didn't see this one earlier. *Love* it! It's so nice to see how Hoss would know his wife that well. *nods*

More and more I wish he would have found love, sigh.

Date: 03/11/2012
Summary:

Hoss attempts to teach Little Joe some mathmatics


Categories: Comedy, Prequel Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1312 Read Count: 164
Published: 07/17/2011 Updated: 07/17/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Hoss the Math Tutor Reviewer: Frannie Signed

LOLOL! Aww man that was priceless! ;)

LOVED it! Note to self: Don't read any of the comedies at work or the students will be giving you a "What the fydge?!" look! ;)



Author's Response:

Haha. Thank you so much Frannie!  I'm really pleased that it was able to make you laugh! :)    

Date: 02/06/2012