Reviews by KatieC
Faith by adamant Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

After a life-shattering event, can Adam's lost faith in himself and humanity ever be recovered?


Categories: Action/Adventure, Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30002 Read Count: 369
Published: 09/13/2015 Updated: 09/13/2015 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Faith Reviewer: KatieC Signed

It was a very touching and interesting story. Poor Adam, being driven to the extreme by such terrible pain and then ready to punish himself to the end. I love how ultimately, it was his father's love that saved him in more ways than one - Ben's plea to his well-connected friends resulted in the pardon, and his love and pain made Adam accept the offer. I also think you have a great talent for creating your own original characters - a talent which many fanfiction writers lack. I loved Kat, even though she's mainly a memory here, she seems like fully fleshed out character, she comes alive in your writing and it is very easy to imagine her being the perfect woman for Adam. Both Solly and the federal marshall were very interesting characters as well. I was really sad when the marshall died, and I can't help but feel a little bit sorry for Solly. Yes, he was a monster, but you showed really well how he became one and how miserable his life was from the very start, which makes him a multi-dimensional villain in my eyes. Great fic, loved every word of it!



Author's Response:

Thank you, KatieC, for reading and writing such a nice review. And thank you for noticing and commenting on the OC's in this story as I do try to make them as alive and well-rounded as the C's. As for Solly, he was certainly a troubled boy who grew up an outsider. Glad that you liked the story and again, thank you for reading.

Date: 07/29/2022