Reviews by PERNELLSulli
FRATERNITY by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
Summary: Adam, Hoss, and Joe are making repairs to the lineshacks. When Adam goes to the pond for a break, everything goes horribly wrong. It's up to Hoss and Joe to get Adam back.
Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9465 Read Count: 485
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

I´ve read it not for the first time Patina...and it will not be the last time...I love all your Adam suffering stories...you are a highly gifted writer and I thank you again for all this thrilling stories....I never can´´t stop reading until the end...no matter if I read it the first the second or the ??? time....thanks



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli!  I'm so flattered to know you enjoy my stories enough to read them many times. :)

Date: 04/11/2012
Summary: The Cartwrights attend a magic act in Virginia City that includes hypnosis. When a murder is committed, Adam is the prime suspect. Does hypnosis hold the key to what happened?
Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7405 Read Count: 121
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

it was fun to read...very cool story...thank you...



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli!  I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it.

Date: 04/13/2012
Summary: Sixteen year old Adam falls asleep at the supper table after a hard week of breaking horses. Believing his brother to be under a witch's spell, Little Joe convinces Hoss to help him break the spell using everything they know from fairytales.
Categories: Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5877 Read Count: 178
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: TO WAKE A SLEEPING BEAUTY Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

I´ve read this story the first time in my BW book...cute lil story Patina...



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli!  I'm thrilled to know you enjoy this little story.

Date: 04/13/2012
Fevered Dreams by Patina Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 33]
Summary:

WHI for The Savage.  Was Ruth Halverson real?  Did Adam really propose marriage to her?  This story attempts to explain some of the events in this episode.


Categories: What Happens Instead?, Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4690 Read Count: 287
Published: 06/07/2008 Updated: 06/07/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fevered Dreams Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

I like Ruth very much ,the savage is one of my favorites,dream or not I love your story and it´s the second time I read it.



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli!  I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed this story for the second time. 

Date: 04/10/2012
Summary: Adam suffers amnesia and is picked up by unsavory characters. Will his family be able to find him in time?
Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 10863 Read Count: 366
Published: 07/03/2008 Updated: 07/03/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

oh my...that was indeed an Adam story...love reading your story very much and in the moment I am complete speechless in a very very good way...love your writing style and the story has all in what an Adam girl wanted to read about...

you made my day...so I will say a Masterpiece of yours....thank you...



Author's Response:

Wow... what a lovely review!!  Thank you so much for it.  You really made MY day!  :)  Thank you again! ~ Deb 

Date: 04/07/2012
A Mouthful of Regret by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Adam's second round-up following his return home from college.  He and Joe aren't getting along but a brutal bear attack changes everything.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5746 Read Count: 827
Published: 07/16/2008 Updated: 07/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Mouthful of Regret Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

oh my ...couldn´t stop reading until the end...this is the second time I read your story first on your forum...you are a highly gifted writer and as I said...glad you are an Adam gal...love it...



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli!  I'm thrilled to know you enjoyed this story for the second time. 

Date: 04/10/2012
New Expectations by Patina Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary: This is the fifth story in the Battle of Wills series. Marie and Adam race their new horses. Luckily, Paul Martin has arrived in Virginia City to practice medicine. Ben has invited Paul out to the Ponderosa for supper. After examining both Marie and Adam, Paul has to relate Marie's and Adam's conditions to Ben.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: The Battle of Wills
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4265 Read Count: 250
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: New Expectations Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

great to read Patina...thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli.

Date: 04/13/2012
Summary:

A What Happened Instead story for No Less A Man. The Virginia City Town Council convinces Adam and Ben that Roy Coffee is no longer capable of doing his job. When Adam explains the situation to Roy, the sheriff swears him in as a deputy and then quits his job. It's then up to Adam to protect Virginia City from the Wagner Gang. When the gang arrives in town to rob the bank, Adam is injured. Ben, Hoss, Joe, and Roy all feel guilt for what has happened to Adam while serving Virginia City's citizens.


Categories: What Happens Instead?, Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10067 Read Count: 371
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Hatful of Guilt Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

that´s where brothers for...great story ,like your writing style very much and I am really glad that the most of your stories are ADAM ff...thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, PERNELLSulli!  I'm thrilled to know you enjoy my stories.  Thank you very much for the lovely compliments.

Date: 04/10/2012
A Tangled Web by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 27]
Summary:

A What Happened Instead story for The Lady From Baltimore. Deborah Banning's scheme to marry her daughter to a Cartwright had come to fruition when Joe proposed to Melinda. But Melinda was in love with Adam. What if Melinda decided to have Adam, no matter the cost?


Categories: What Happens Instead?, Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9583 Read Count: 394
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Tangled Web Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

another masterpeace of yours...love all your Adam - suffering stories...great read and thanks for writing all this wonderful ff for us...bravo,bravo



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli.  I'm so happy to know you enjoy my stories.  :)

Date: 04/10/2012
Summary: Adam is injured when he and Little Joe are making fence repairs. Little Joe makes a bargain with God--if Adam recovers he won't be a spoiled brat anymore.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8255 Read Count: 367
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: I Won't Be Spoiled No More Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

oh my...Patina as I said...I love your writing style very much and I can´t  get enough of your stories...it seems all so real and the characters of our 4 are like we know them from the shows and so should at be...I admire you very much for your talent.

Date: 04/11/2012
Devil's Bargain by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

WHI for Death at Dawn.


Categories: What Happens Instead?, Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5702 Read Count: 323
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Devil's Bargain Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

Hoss and Joe have such a smart brother,they should have trust him in every part of his doing...fine story Patina ...

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli.  Hoss and Joe were worried that Sam Bryant would hang their father no matter what they did.  Thank goodness Adam's plan worked in the episode and Sam Bryant returned Ben safe and sound.

Date: 04/11/2012
Summary: After a long day of repairing fences, Adam, Hoss, and Joe decide to spend the night by the lake and enjoy some popcorn.
Categories: Comedy Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1642 Read Count: 137
Published: 10/18/2008 Updated: 10/18/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Passing Time and Popping Corn Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

oh my..it is because of Adams ancle...good to read that it was not to bad...love the 3 of them together...great brotherhood...and dadburnit Hoos that was it with the pop corn....grin...fine little story Patina ...thank you...



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli!  Making popcorn should have been so easy to do. LOL  I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed this little story.

Date: 04/11/2012
Seeds of Doubt by Patina Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 15]
Summary: WHN for The Lawmaker. Asa Moran was riding high as acting sheriff after killing those two would-be robbers at the Express Office. When Adam investigates, Moran is determined to bring the high-and-mighty Cartwrights down. This story includes several scenes that were "missing" from the episode.
Categories: Drama, What Happens Next? Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6226 Read Count: 304
Published: 10/27/2008 Updated: 10/27/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Seeds of Doubt Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

as I said...love your writing style...I want more ...i have spend all my vecation with your stories...you made my holydays Patina...thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli!  Wow--your vacation reading my stories?  I'm honored!  I'm so pleased to know you enjoy them!

Date: 04/13/2012
Drei Söhne by Nikky Rated: PG starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

In einem Hafenviertel holt Joe zwei Gepäckstücke ab, die dort nach Adams Verschwinden von der Ponderosa auftauchen.

Achtung, Death Fic

 


Categories: German Characters: Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5461 Read Count: 82
Published: 12/28/2008 Updated: 12/28/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Drei Söhne Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

Hallo Nikki,was für eine wunderschöne traurige Geschichte,deine Art zu schreiben hat mich sehr berührt und okay...ich hab geheult,als ich Adams Brief las...

sehr speziell,bravo,bravo....Hut ab...

Date: 05/07/2011
Summary:

Adam Cartwright is caught in a cave-in and gets some unexpected company.


Categories: Mystery Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4732 Read Count: 151
Published: 02/05/2009 Updated: 02/05/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

I´ve loved reading your story,poor Adam,but everything is gonna be alright...like the very nice Ghosts too...well done thank you...

Date: 04/14/2012
Summary:

Adam and Hoss are lost and must make their own way home on different paths.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14666 Read Count: 159
Published: 02/06/2009 Updated: 02/06/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

oh my...you caught me with that story...fantastic written...that´s what I ´m looking for...hope you write more in this style????please

Date: 04/14/2012
Summary: WHN for The Ride
Categories: What Happens Next?, Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3419 Read Count: 289
Published: 04/17/2009 Updated: 04/17/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Upholding the Family Pride Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

another great read Patina...but Adam don´t snore...the ride is one of my favorite eps and you wrote it,it should be....bravo,bravo



Author's Response:

LOL, PERNELLSulli.  Maybe Adam only snores every once in a while (lol).  I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed this little follow up to a fantastic episode.

Date: 04/13/2012
No More Games by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
Summary:

When Adam realizes he's in the act of killing Peter Kane, he's horrified that he's finally lost control and proved his tormentor right. As he makes his escape, he's reminded that two men left him in the desert to die, too. Just who is the better man?


Categories: Drama, What Happens Next? Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3308 Read Count: 132
Published: 06/25/2009 Updated: 06/25/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: No More Games Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

I love that you wrote it this way...Adams thoughts ...don´t ask for my blood pressure please...I am completely ready with the  nerves  and I have to thought about it right now...great story...thanks

Date: 04/11/2012
My Trust Kept by Deb Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Trapped in the mines, Adam thinks of the thing closest to him. His family... ~A WHIB for The Philip Diedesheimer Story~


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1693 Read Count: 165
Published: 07/13/2009 Updated: 07/13/2009 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

thank you Deb...you are a very good ff writer and glad you wrote so fantastic Adam stories...bravo,bravo..



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, PernellSulli!  I'm honored to know you think that highly of my work. :)  ~ Deb 

Date: 04/07/2012
a christmas without her by mumu74 Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

christmas is a beautiful time; but can be a hard one, when life has been cruel.. Ben has to face it... But christmas is magic


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1145 Read Count: 238
Published: 01/18/2010 Updated: 01/18/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

mumu this is such a wonderful sad story...it was great for me reading it and I am copletely amazed by your very special writing style...merci beacoup...



Author's Response:

thanks sister, your words touched me. I'm glad, you like it. Thanks for the nice comment. 

Date: 04/07/2012
Summary:

A WHN for The Hayburner. Hoss tells what Adam did to him after finding out about him winning money on Joe's horse.


Categories: Comedy, What Happens Next? Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1130 Read Count: 229
Published: 02/26/2010 Updated: 02/26/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: No More Security Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

my favorites are always Adam and Hoss together in a adventure...this is a very funny one...I really enjoyed...thanks

Date: 04/11/2012
Summary:

Two men are entrusted to carry out a plan to kidnap one of Ben's sons and hold him for ransom.


Categories: Comedy Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5438 Read Count: 315
Published: 08/16/2010 Updated: 08/16/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Sure-Fire Plan Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

to funny Patina...our Adam was so cool...I enjoy your writing style very much and you made my day off with your stories....thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you, PERNELLSulli.  Adam finally got that vacation he wanted (lol).  I honored to know you've spent your day off work reading my stories.  :)

Date: 04/10/2012
Summary:

Joe would like to be treated like a man....


Categories: Action/Adventure Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12214 Read Count: 274
Published: 08/31/2010 Updated: 08/31/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

joe is telling the story ...I like that very much and it is fun to read .I enjoy your story very much...merci cherri....von ulli



Author's Response:

thanks for the review, sister. 

Date: 04/07/2012
A second chance by mumu74 Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

 

When Ben succombs to heat exhaustion, who should appear but Joan Wingate, the young woman he rescued from the Paiutes. Only now she's Mrs. Henry Dexter, but does she still have feelings for Ben? And does he have feelings for her? Could their love possibly have a second chance?

Please read and review


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64305 Read Count: 83
Published: 09/02/2010 Updated: 09/02/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

you made me speechless mumu...you are an fantastic writer and this is another great story of yours...you are the best for Ben....mercy deine ulli



Author's Response:

Thanks Ulli, I'm glad you appreciate this one. 

Date: 04/07/2012
Absolution by adamant Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Adam wants to protect his wife from an inquest in the shooting of a ranch hand.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizeable characters, settings, etc., are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2177 Read Count: 168
Published: 10/09/2010 Updated: 10/09/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Absolution Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

this story can be the reason why I love Adam so much...what a husband...awww

another fantastic story of yours Ant...thank you



Author's Response:

Thank you, Ulli, for visiting the Library and reading this story. I'm glad that you liked it and I appreciate your comments.

Date: 02/05/2012