Reviews by Gillie
A Rose For Marie by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Adam finally learns to accept marie as his mother.

 

This is a companinon story to Forever Ben Cartwright.


Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2706 Read Count: 224
Published: 09/06/2010 Updated: 09/06/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Touching, sweet look at Adam's struggle to love.  Enjoyed your story very much! Thanks!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review.

Date: 05/27/2011
Forever Ben Cartwright by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

As Ben Cartwright lies dying each of his sons recall a special moment that they shared with their Pa.

A Companion story to A Rose For Marie


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4127 Read Count: 95
Published: 09/06/2010 Updated: 09/06/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Great story, deansgirl.  I wasn't sure there was going to be a happy ending till the very end.  Each boy had such touching memories.  Very enjoyable read!  Thanks.

Date: 06/27/2012
The Open Door by adamant Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Adam wants to marry a woman who has her own private reasons for not accepting him.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc., are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Drama, Romance Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4054 Read Count: 310
Published: 09/09/2010 Updated: 09/09/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Thank goodness it all worked out. I am always rooting for Adam to get whatever it is that he wants! And in my imagination Adam and Mrs. Brody went on to have a whole passel of kids! Ah, the beauty of fiction. Thanks for this entertaining story.



Author's Response:

Thanks for pulling it out of the atchives and reading it, Gillie. I'm glad that you liked it and that you let me know. Thanks.

Date: 07/20/2011
Summary:

Adam has his heart stolen--twice.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc., are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author. The author is in no way associated witht the owners, creators or producers of any media franchise. No copyright infringement is intend


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1339 Read Count: 268
Published: 09/09/2010 Updated: 09/09/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Very lovely story, Ant! I loved every word. Complete, believable, filled with the best kinds of feelings! Thanks for sharing it here!

Author's Response:

Thanks, Gillie. So glad that you liked it. My pleasure to share.

Date: 12/04/2012
Interlude by adamant Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 20]
Summary:

Ben, trying to find help for an ill Joseph, finds someone who knows as much about loss as he does.

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc., are the property of their respective owners. The original charactres and plot are the property of the author. No copyright infringement is intended.

 


Categories: Prequel, Drama Characters: Ben Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2884 Read Count: 386
Published: 09/19/2010 Updated: 09/19/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Powerful story, ant! Sparse, but vivid and true.  I agree with your conclusion...all suffer, but if you are lucky, there are moments in life when the connection wtih another makes life rich again.  Thanks for sharing your story with us.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Gillie, for reading it. I remember that I wrote this story during my lunch breaks over about a week and I really liked the OC. She and Ben had both suffered.

Date: 06/30/2012
Autumn's Surprise by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Summary:

Autumn is starting on the Ponderosa and with it comes a wonderful and long awaited surprise.


Categories: Sequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: The Autumn Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1214 Read Count: 304
Published: 10/06/2010 Updated: 10/06/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

I love the Adam coming home stories. And I really enjoyed how you painted the picture of the Cartwrights moving through the woods with the tribe watching them as they went.  Of course, I have lots of questions...can't wait to read the next story?  Hope you will fill in some of the details.

Date: 01/16/2012
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

I love the Adam coming home stories. And I really enjoyed how you painted the picture of the Cartwrights moving through the woods with the tribe watching them as they went.  Of course, I have lots of questions...can't wait to read the next story?  Hope you will fill in some of the details.

Date: 01/16/2012
Absolution by adamant Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 21]
Summary:

Adam wants to protect his wife from an inquest in the shooting of a ranch hand.

 

Disclaimer: All publicly recognizeable characters, settings, etc., are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plots are the property of the author. No copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2177 Read Count: 172
Published: 10/09/2010 Updated: 10/09/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Absolution Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Powerfully written, Ant.  Adam's passionate protection of his wife, and Roy's touching rememberance of Mary got me all misty-eyed. Loved your story!!



Author's Response:

So glad that you liked it, Gillie! Thank you for taking the time to read it.

Date: 06/22/2012
Summary:

Jenna Rose finds herself on the Ponderosa. Is she awake or dreaming?


Categories: Drama, Romance, What Happens Next? Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 13 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15550 Read Count: 2173
Published: 10/15/2010 Updated: 10/15/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Adam? Is it really Adam? I can't wait to read more!
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
This is wonderful stuff, Angel. I really like how you tell the story with dialog. It's like being in the room with Adam and Jenna.
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
This is such an interesting premise. I am intrigued as I wonder what's what. On to the next chapter to find out.
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Hilarious!! You go, Jenna!!!
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
I loved that scene. Joe's line, "She insulted all of us?" made me laugh. Good old Abigail!
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Poor Jenna. I wonder how long she'll get to stay on the Ponderosa. I keep hoping that she doesn't ever have to leave.
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
You know, I think this is the first fan fic I've read that actually included the outhouse. Nice scene with Ben.
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
What a sweet scene! Rang true. Bravo!
Date: 12/24/2012
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
There is so much to enjoy in this chapter. The exchanges with Hop Sing and Hoss are very sweet. I loved the play between Jenna and Adam.
Date: 12/26/2012
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Abigail is certainly an unappealing character.
Date: 12/26/2012
Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
The family sticks together, but also honors commitments made to others! I love how you had them do both.
Date: 12/26/2012
Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
The way you tell this story makes me feel like I am standing right there in the scene. Very enjoyable.
Date: 12/26/2012
Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
I lovourtour story, angel! I think there's a sequel that I will definitely read, and I hope more after that. I love Jenna and how immediate it all feels! Great story.
Date: 12/26/2012
Autumn's Story by deansgirl Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

A sequel to Autumn's Surprise.  Adam is awake now and he's ready to tell his story.


Categories: Action/Adventure, Sequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: The Autumn Series
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1751 Read Count: 215
Published: 10/25/2010 Updated: 10/25/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Great use of that quote, "A sad story is about to begin!"  But what an awful time Adam had getting home. It's going to be difficult for Pa to tell him about Hoss.

Date: 01/16/2012
Summary:

Jenna Rose finds herself back at the Ponderosa (Originally part of the first "Awake" story)


Categories: Drama, Romance Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39089 Read Count: 2744
Published: 10/26/2010 Updated: 10/26/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Yay!!! She's back. Looking forward to seeing what is going to happen next!
Date: 12/26/2012
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Another lovely scene.
Date: 12/26/2012
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
The four Cartwrights for protection would make me feel safe!! Lucky Jenna!
Date: 12/26/2012