Reviews by Cowgirl
Summary: The Cartwrights attend a magic act in Virginia City that includes hypnosis. When a murder is committed, Adam is the prime suspect. Does hypnosis hold the key to what happened?
Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7405 Read Count: 124
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Very interesting story. You also did some research on Mesmer, which was very interesting, too. Thanks fo the work you have put int this story and thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl.  I'm glad to know you enjoyed this story.
Date: 08/14/2008
Summary: Sixteen year old Adam falls asleep at the supper table after a hard week of breaking horses. Believing his brother to be under a witch's spell, Little Joe convinces Hoss to help him break the spell using everything they know from fairytales.
Categories: Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5877 Read Count: 189
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: TO WAKE A SLEEPING BEAUTY Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Adam the Sleeping Beauty. What an imagination little children can have. Great story. Loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl!  Everything made perfect sense to Little Joe (lol).  I'm glad to know you enjoyed this story.
Date: 08/13/2008
Summary: Little Joe has to write an essay on George Washington for Miss Jones' history class. Finding the information in Adam's history books boring, Little Joe decides to spice up Washington's life.
Categories: Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3571 Read Count: 156
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: THE HISTORY ESSAY Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Great story. I'd love to read more about Joe's essays. 

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl.  Joe might be writing more essays in the future ;)  I'm glad to know you enjoyed this story!
Date: 09/03/2008
PONDEROSA PACHYDERM by Patina Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 19]
Summary: A What Happened Next For Old Sheba.
Categories: What Happens Next? Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4284 Read Count: 158
Published: 03/23/2008 Updated: 03/23/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Ponderosa Pachyderm Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
What a fun? I lughed so hard  almost cried. Thanks Patina. Wonderful story.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl, for letting me know you enjoyed this story.
Date: 08/13/2008
Sunset on the Ponderosa by pony Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 70]
Summary:

We all know the Cartwrights will live forever in our hearts. This is the simple story of how they reached that destiny.


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 6895 Read Count: 1048
Published: 04/07/2008 Updated: 04/07/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Oh my pony that was such a great first chapter. Such a wonderful and heartwarming description of Joe that it nearly made me cry ( although I am not Joe-Gal smile)
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Pony, this story is getting better and better. I loved your description of people Joe cherished. And I absolutely  loved the paragraph about Alice and Marie.
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
That was so neat pony. I could feel the close bond between the brothers and glad that some questions had been answered.
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
That was so very beautiful and touching. I honestly thank you for writing that.

Author's Response:

And I honestly thank YOU for such a sweet note. Thank you, cowgirl.

Date: 11/18/2008
Fevered Dreams by Patina Rated: PG [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

WHI for The Savage.  Was Ruth Halverson real?  Did Adam really propose marriage to her?  This story attempts to explain some of the events in this episode.


Categories: What Happens Instead?, Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4690 Read Count: 300
Published: 06/07/2008 Updated: 06/07/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fevered Dreams Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Great story. Ruth was a great character but I never undertsood how sh could leave him like this. Of course she tried to save his life, but somehow I can see her as a perfect wife for Adam.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl.  The only explanation that makes sense for me is that Adam dreamed up his romance with Ruth.  I'm glad to know you enjoyed this story.
Date: 08/14/2008
The Journey by swgirl Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 76]
Summary:

The second in a series of stories about Kate and Adam.  This one picks up where "Beginnings - East Meets West" left off.


Categories: Romance Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright, Sheriff Roy Coffee
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 42915 Read Count: 3605
Published: 07/01/2008 Updated: 07/01/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1-4 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
What a love story, enjoyed reading it.

Author's Response:

I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.

Date: 08/14/2008
A Mouthful of Regret by Patina Rated: PG-13 [Reviews - 56]
Summary: Adam's second round-up following his return home from college.  He and Joe aren't getting along but a brutal bear attack changes everything.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5746 Read Count: 890
Published: 07/16/2008 Updated: 07/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Mouthful of Regret Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Loved that story, these are the ties that bond.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl, for letting me know you enjoyed this story.
Date: 08/14/2008
Summary: This is the second story in the Battle of Wills series. During a family picnic at the lake, Adam gets in trouble adding poison ivy to Hoss' bouquet of widlflowers for Marie. After an argument with his father, Adam decides to leave home. A neighbor and old friend, Abe Garvey, shows Marie that there's more to education than reading, writing, and arithmetic while leading the search for Adam.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: The Battle of Wills
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5671 Read Count: 466
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Education is More Than Three Rs Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Oh I love little Hoss. He's so sweet and charming.

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Cowgirl!
Date: 08/11/2008
Summary: This is the 10th story in the Battle of Wills series. The Cartwrights celebrate Adam's 12th birthday.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: The Battle of Wills
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5014 Read Count: 280
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Presents From the Heart Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Cute story. Thanks for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl.
Date: 08/13/2008
Summary: Adam is injured when he and Little Joe are making fence repairs. Little Joe makes a bargain with God--if Adam recovers he won't be a spoiled brat anymore.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8255 Read Count: 387
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: I Won't Be Spoiled No More Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Oh I loved the last part "Open the barn door and let in the wagon" -too funny.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl, for letting me know you enjoyed this story.
Date: 08/11/2008
Summary: Marie Cartwright is sick with a chest cold. Three year old Little Joe discovers her cough syrup.
Categories: Comedy, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2682 Read Count: 249
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Spoonful of Medicine Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Little Joe and coughing syrup. Wonderful. Thanks Patina

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl, for letting me know you enjoyed this story!
Date: 08/13/2008
Summary: At six years old, Hoss finds himself to be the middle child instead of the baby. Not quite old enough to be responsible but not quite young enough to be thought of as a baby anymore.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2300 Read Count: 226
Published: 07/17/2008 Updated: 07/17/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Middle Child Syndrome Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Cute story, I could picture a little Hosss waiting for his chance. Great story. Thanjs for sharing.

Author's Response: Thank you, Cowgirl!  It must have been hard on Hoss to know he was a big brother like Adam but not allowed to be as responsible. 
Date: 08/14/2008
Summary: Adam is accidentally beamed on the starship Enterprise lead by the famous Captain Kirk
Categories: Action/Adventure, Future Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 9610 Read Count: 200
Published: 07/20/2008 Updated: 07/20/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
VERY interesting story ViveAdam and very good done, too.
Date: 08/13/2008
Summary: This is a story that I wrote for my english class. My teacher really liked it. It's about the boy's while Ben is out of Town. There is foreshadowing. And we weren't supposed to have blood and Gore so nothing gruesome in this story. Any spelling or grammer errors are my fault.
Categories: Drama, Comedy Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1452 Read Count: 152
Published: 08/29/2008 Updated: 08/29/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Good story. I can see why your teacher liked it.

Author's Response: Thank You!
Date: 09/03/2008
Summary: Feature

This is purely fanfiction, my take on  WHN with this episode of a Bonanza story.  I am in no way associated with the authors, actors, or producers of the show-


Categories: What Happens Next?, Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 5551 Read Count: 3118
Published: 10/04/2008 Updated: 10/04/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
I can understand why Les wanted to get away from Hoss. I would have reacted the same way.
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Ben will solve it, won't he?
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
That was a very beautiful chapter.
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Now it is getting dramatic and I wonder what Hoss will do about all of this.
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Good chapter.
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
Well, that is far more interesting that the episode itself. I stay curious
Date: 11/18/2008
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Cowgirl Signed
I like Les, yes I like her but I wonder how she will react.
Date: 11/18/2008