Reviews by cma
A Mouthful of Regret by Patina Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 55]
Summary: Adam's second round-up following his return home from college.  He and Joe aren't getting along but a brutal bear attack changes everything.
Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5746 Read Count: 828
Published: 07/16/2008 Updated: 07/16/2008 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Mouthful of Regret Reviewer: cma Signed

Good story however, I find myself conflicted with how Joe acted. Don't you think he was a bit old to be sitting in Ben's lap? 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, cma.  Each child is different.  I'm glad to know you enjoyed the story.

Date: 05/29/2012
Redemption by EPM Rated: G starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

A tragic fire causes a crisis of trust and faith.


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7394 Read Count: 238
Published: 11/20/2011 Updated: 11/20/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed

I've read this before but enjoyed it a second time. Well done!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much!

EPM

Date: 11/20/2011
Small Gifts by EPM Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

A Cartwright Christmas Tale---


Categories: Holiday Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3581 Read Count: 107
Published: 12/02/2011 Updated: 12/02/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed

Excellent!!! Your writing style and characterization is always spot on.



Author's Response:

Thank for the nice review. EPM

Date: 12/03/2011
Summary:

They're all around me now just like I thought they'd be and I'm still no closer to finding a way out of this fix. Not that I'm looking too hard for one; I guess I'm still hoping that my family will show up to rescue me, but that mere flicker of hope in my heart is quickly dying...like I am.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2951 Read Count: 357
Published: 01/22/2012 Updated: 01/22/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed

Excellent

Date: 01/22/2012
Summary:

A beautiful summer's day becomes a struggle of the spirit as well as the body.


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5687 Read Count: 238
Published: 03/22/2012 Updated: 03/22/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed

Excellent. I've read this story before but the second time was just as sweet as the first.



Author's Response:

What a nice thing to say!  And thank you being kind enough to leave a comment.

EPM

Date: 03/22/2012
Unseen Link by EPM Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Ben and Adam are ambushed on the way home. Seperated by circumstance, something stronger keeps them together.


Categories: Action/Adventure Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8429 Read Count: 129
Published: 04/18/2012 Updated: 04/18/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed

Great story. Loved the way Ben "heard" Adam. Any more sitting around your closet?



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving the nice comment. Yes, several stories that do not appear on this site but no new stories right now. I am, however feeling the urge to write again.

EPM

Date: 04/22/2012
THE MAN IN THE MIDDLE by Krys Rated: Family Friendly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Hoss Cartwright often wondered what side he would be on should the war come to the Ponderosa ... one cold winters night he found out exactly where he stood.


Categories: Drama Characters: Hoss (Eric) Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 13974 Read Count: 56
Published: 12/16/2012 Updated: 12/16/2012 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed
Thanks Krystyna, for a story well-written. It was indeed the viewpoint of the man in the middle.

Author's Response:

Hi cma, yes I thought it drove that point home to him as well, tragically even though it was ... thank you, cma.   Krystyna

Date: 01/02/2013
Burden Of Guilt by TLR Rated: PG starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

After college, Adam comes home.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1640 Read Count: 364
Published: 02/05/2013 Updated: 02/05/2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed
Excellent story but it ended way too soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, cma, and for reading the story.

Date: 02/05/2013
The Gambler by faust Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Most people thought Adam wasn’t a gambler. They thought wrong.


Categories: Drama, What Happens Next? Characters: Adam Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1750 Read Count: 81
Published: 04/24/2013 Updated: 04/24/2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: The Gambler Reviewer: cma Signed
Sweet!!

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Date: 04/25/2013
Miss Millie by Krys Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Millicent Browne leaves her family in order to discover more about herself and the world, then she meets Hoss Cartwright and realises HE is her world....


Categories: Romance Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 30683 Read Count: 44
Published: 04/25/2013 Updated: 04/25/2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed
Great story Krystyna.

Author's Response:

Thankyou so much, cma, glad you enjoyed it.  Krystyna

Date: 04/26/2013
A Wolf Story by TLR Rated: PG-13 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 10]
Summary:

Ben relates a wolf story.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1078 Read Count: 130
Published: 04/26/2013 Updated: 04/26/2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed
Sweet.

Author's Response:

Thank you, cma.

Date: 04/26/2013