Reviews by tine1
Summary:

Three years ago, Adam left the Ponderosa. Will a chance meeting lead Hoss and Joe to the brother they've lost and release Ben from his depression?


Categories: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 52769 Read Count: 7076
Published: 08/20/2010 Updated: 08/20/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thank you for the really compelling story.

I coudn' t stop readling.

Date: 12/22/2020
Summary:

Jenna Rose finds herself back at the Ponderosa (Originally part of the first "Awake" story)


Categories: Drama, Romance Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 39089 Read Count: 2778
Published: 10/26/2010 Updated: 10/26/2010 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 28 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

first i didn't like the story. But after a while i enjoyed it.

Thank you it's well written

Date: 03/05/2021
Summary:

When Joe leaves the Ponderosa to discover the world that was opening up in new territories he little realised that he would find the love of his life, nearly getting killed and bringing Hoss from the Ponderosa and Adam away from the sea in search of him. 


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 154236 Read Count: 227
Published: 07/10/2011 Updated: 07/10/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thank you for a wunderful story, with a well researched backgraund.

I really enjoyed it



Author's Response:

What a delight to find your review for this story.  Thank you so very much.  This story was really the beginning of my Captain Cartwright series, but I remember with fondness, the hours spent in researching and writing this particular one.   I never thought that all these years later I would still be writing about him, his family, his extended family. Thank you again for letting me know you enjoyed it so much.

Date: 04/19/2021
Howling at the Moon by pbeaking Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Joe becomes concerned that his brother may be something other than human after reading a book about the behaviorisms of non-human beings. When Adam gets wind of Joe's beliefs, he decides to have a little fun with younger brother.


Categories: Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 5500 Read Count: 202
Published: 08/22/2011 Updated: 08/22/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Howling at the Moon Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Rarely laughed so much.

Date: 01/04/2021
A Tale of three Puppies by Lily of the West Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 18]
Summary:

Ben needs to get a dog for the Ponderosa - but which of these three should he take home with him? One of my first fics ever, written long ago.


Categories: Comedy Characters: Ben Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1055 Read Count: 100
Published: 10/16/2011 Updated: 10/16/2011 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: A Tale of three Puppies Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Wunderful story.

Good idea to equale the characters of the puppies with the three well known boys.

Thank you

Date: 12/28/2020
Summary:

Adam has overcome the ordeal that nearly broke him and now sets out to find the woman he loves - and then try to set things straight with his father. A flock of sheep gets in the way and sparks off a bitter power struggle between father and son. Adam won't give in anymore, and Ben cannot accept that his son isn't a boy any longer. And in the background, Adam's unknown foe is pulling some strings of his own.


Categories: Action/Adventure, Drama, Romance Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: The Dreaming Eagle Trilogy
Chapters: 24 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 132751 Read Count: 1500
Published: 01/24/2013 Updated: 01/24/2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 83. The Wedding Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thank you for the wonderful, very well written story.

Nobody will notice that english is not your native tongue, or at least not me, because it's not mine either.

You  managed to combine love, understanding, hate, violence and much more into one great story.  The explanation why Adam is no longer on the Pondersoa is a plausible and a beautifule one. Finally he manages to free himself from the influence of his father and to live his own life. Something i had always hoped that it would happen and which, as far as i know, Pernell R. also wanted, but the scriptwriters did not realize.

The characters are really well met. i find Ben really unsympathetic, like the way he came across to me in the first few episodes, before they changed his appearance. Nice that he becomes more personable in the end of the story.

Litte Joe, who has to listen to his father, but at the same time has his own head and is loyal to his brother.

Hoss - his monologue when adam is sick in bed and has separated from Lil, is wonderful and unique.

I can really grind the whole story in fornt of my inner eye.

many many thanks 

Date: 07/18/2021
Not a Political Man by faust Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Yet another discussion with Adam prompts Joe into doing something rash and potentially life-threatening--and into thinking more about politics than he ever wanted to.


Categories: Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2505 Read Count: 121
Published: 08/26/2013 Updated: 08/26/2013 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Not a Political Man Reviewer: tine1 Signed

The story made me smile

Date: 01/08/2021
One Candle by Cheaux Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

A tragic event in Virginia City sends shock waves across the globe and spurs Adam to return home to find the truth.

 

A What Happened Instead for the episode, “Five Candles” written by Ken Trevey.  It is not necessary to have seen the episode to follow or understand this story.


Categories: All Genres Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Candy Canady, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 15851 Read Count: 223
Published: 01/14/2014 Updated: 01/14/2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

A wunderful story.

Date: 01/09/2021
The Box At Paiute Bluff by Tracy Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

What hard working rancher wouldn't take advantage of a day off? Adam does just that, and his relaxing day brings mystery and danger to the Ponderosa.


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36145 Read Count: 143
Published: 12/11/2014 Updated: 12/11/2014 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

great

Date: 05/13/2021
Summary:

Riding with a posse in the middle of a storm, Joe is injured in an accident. Adam, with Sheriff Coffee's help, rescues Joe who has already made a startling discovery. Adam, takes Joe along to safety to await the doctor's arrival at a nearby way station, but this puts the brothers smack bang in the middle of a murder. Can Adam solve the whodunit and identify which of several stranded stagecoach passengers, all of them potential suspects, is the actual killer? Also what does Joe's earlier discovery and a fifteen year old robbery have to do with the murder?  


Categories: Action/Adventure, Mystery, Drama Characters: Adam Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright, Sheriff Roy Coffee
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 42108 Read Count: 424
Published: 03/31/2016 Updated: 03/31/2016 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Murder At Dayton Crossing Reviewer: tine1 Signed

A very well written  crime thriller, that includes the wonderfully described Bonanza-characters of Joe and Adam Cartwright.

Date: 01/07/2021
Summary:

Little Joe goes out riding on a late winter's day... without the proper coat. He gets lost in the woods when a blizzard comes up.
Adam and Hoss head out to look for Joe. They find him and bring him home. But Adam becomes seriously ill the next day.

Will he survive?

Written as a WHB/WHN for "Elizabeth, My Love."

 


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: Journal Entries
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8935 Read Count: 196
Published: 06/06/2016 Updated: 06/06/2016 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Frozen Consequences Reviewer: tine1 Signed
A very good story.  It convinced me. It would have been a good episode for sure.
I've always wondered what happened to make Adam lie in bed so sick.
You described the characters really good and you made a  good transition to Elisabeth my love.
In my imagination I have also thought of a story, but it stays in my head because I cannot write and it will stay their, because your story exists.
Date: 01/02/2021
Journey's End by Tracy Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 34]
Summary:

Disappointment comes in many forms, and when family is the root of the disappointment, it can be a difficult journey to forgiveness.


Categories: Mystery Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 30 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 47566 Read Count: 1268
Published: 10/12/2016 Updated: 10/12/2016 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thank you for a well written, wunderful story



Author's Response:

Thank you, tine1 for reading and leaving a comment. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.

Date: 05/11/2021
Summary:

In this story Adam is sent to Alaska to retrieve some papers relative to the sale of the country from Russia.  However, on the Ponderosa Little Joe is seriously injured and faces a bleak future, although little Peggy Dayton Cartwright is there to cheer him up as best she can....


Categories: Drama Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 216335 Read Count: 48
Published: 12/21/2017 Updated: 12/21/2017 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

A wonderful story.  Gratulation.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, tineI.  Really glad you enjoyed this story.  

Date: 04/25/2021
Autumn Romance by CowgirlAtHeart Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 9]
Summary:

Written for the 2019 "Autumn at the Ranch" challenge.

 

As autumn draws to a close, Little Joe goes to Arizona to see if he can rekindle a romance that started over the summer.


Categories: Romance, Sequel Characters: Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3976 Read Count: 55
Published: 10/17/2019 Updated: 10/17/2019 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Autumn Romance Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thanks for the story

Date: 02/03/2021
Fireworks by Patina Rated: PG [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

What's the 4th of July without fireworks?

 

Disclaimer: I don't own Bonanza or the Cartwrights. Original plot and original characters are property of the author. No money is being made from this story.


Categories: Comedy Characters: All
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 3602 Read Count: 26
Published: 09/05/2020 Updated: 09/05/2020 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Fireworks Reviewer: tine1 Signed

rally funny

Date: 04/29/2021
The Camping Trip by flabirder Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 9]
Summary: Feature

Adam is home from college and looking for a way to reconnect with his youngest brother.


Categories: Action/Adventure Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4720 Read Count: 103
Published: 10/26/2020 Updated: 10/26/2020 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

A wonderful story

Date: 02/03/2021
A Velly Merry Christmas Dinner by Marla Fair Rated: Family Friendly [Reviews - 5]
Summary:

Little Joe Cartwright pushes through a snowstorm and arrives home to find things not as they should be.  He knows where his pa and brothers are - but where is Hop Sing? 


Categories: Holiday, Prequel Characters: Hop Sing
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 3036 Read Count: 32
Published: 12/23/2020 Updated: 12/23/2020 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thank you for the Christmas story.  Now its Christmas Eve and now i'm in the right mood.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I hope you enjoy it.  Merry Christmas! 

Date: 12/24/2020
Summary:

I know of no better way to honor Lorne Greene, the man, than to show him as the remarkable man we know and love – Ben Cartwright.  A stand-off at the bank reveals what's truly important.


As a note regarding my prequels, I love Roy Coffee and so, in my Bonanza world, Roy was an acting 'lawman' from a very early date in the settlement.  Nothing official, of course, but acting on the town council's behalf to uphold the law along with other men.  Later, after a stint as deputy, he became sheriff.  


Categories: Drama, Prequel Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright, Sheriff Roy Coffee
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 4079 Read Count: 62
Published: 02/11/2021 Updated: 02/11/2021 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

A good story 

I love all your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  You are most kind! 

Date: 05/23/2021
Summary:

Written for the 2021 Ponderosa Nightmare Challenge.  A youthful dream becomes an adult nightmare for Hop Sing. Does he have what it takes to save his beloved Cartwrights from death? 


Categories: Mystery, Drama, Holiday Characters: Adam Cartwright, Ben Cartwright, Hop Sing, Hoss (Eric) Cartwright, Little Joe Cartwright
Series: None
Chapters: 4 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 7417 Read Count: 48
Published: 10/28/2021 Updated: 10/28/2021 [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thank you for a great Story.



Author's Response:

You are welcome! 

Date: 11/08/2021
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

A wonderful story. Thank you



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it! 

Date: 12/05/2021