Thank you for the wonderful, very well written story.
Nobody will notice that english is not your native tongue, or at least not me, because it's not mine either.
You managed to combine love, understanding, hate, violence and much more into one great story. The explanation why Adam is no longer on the Pondersoa is a plausible and a beautifule one. Finally he manages to free himself from the influence of his father and to live his own life. Something i had always hoped that it would happen and which, as far as i know, Pernell R. also wanted, but the scriptwriters did not realize.
The characters are really well met. i find Ben really unsympathetic, like the way he came across to me in the first few episodes, before they changed his appearance. Nice that he becomes more personable in the end of the story.
Litte Joe, who has to listen to his father, but at the same time has his own head and is loyal to his brother.
Hoss - his monologue when adam is sick in bed and has separated from Lil, is wonderful and unique.
I can really grind the whole story in fornt of my inner eye.
many many thanks