I suppose I never wrote a review here for you. I know I did on the fanfic site. This is my favorite story out of the many you have written. You have written so many scenes that are riveting and capture our thoughts of the more.romantic yet logical Cartwright. The imagery in your words paint a vivid visual each moment while reading the story. Years back, I like so many others wanted a sequel or epilogue, but now not so much. The sequel would have to be more Zelphia's story than Adam's. I see the jasmine as a hint that perhaps Hop Sing's good luck jade might have been a sign of her fate.
Author's Response:
I wasn't aware you had read this story at all but I appreciate that you've reviewed it here, Julianna. This is one of my favorites as well as it seemed to basically write itself. I agree that a sequel wouldn't have worked which is why I didn't write one--this story seemed to work all on its own. Thank you for reviewing and pulling up this older stpry.