Reviews For Burden Of Guilt
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

A nice poignant story

Date: 03/17/2018 - 05:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

I was thinking this was going to be a death fiction, but the ending turned out to be a happy one. It was good to see how the family reacted to Adam's return home from college.

Date: 11/13/2017 - 02:53 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Adams Welsh Girl Signed

The middle bit scared me I thought my beloved Adam was going to die.

The end so lovely 

Thank you

Date: 07/13/2014 - 09:14 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed
Powerful story, TLR. You described what was going on so well that I was feeling right along with the Cartwights...first the joy of Adam's return, and then the horror and fear of the accident. Well done!!!

Author's Response:

Gillie, I'm glad the story made you feel that. I appreciate your time in reading and reviewing it.

Date: 02/14/2013 - 03:18 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: pam Signed

beautiful written story and I enjoyed it



Author's Response:

Thanks a lot for reading, Pam. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 02/13/2013 - 08:55 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ljac Signed

Wow, I sure didn't see that coming!  Very interesting story.



Author's Response:

ljac, thanks so much for reading it, and taking the time to leave a review. It is much appreciated.

Date: 02/12/2013 - 04:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bertha Signed

Poor Hoss, very good story, thanks



Author's Response:

Yes, poor Hoss carried a big weight, Bertha. Thanks as always for reading.

Date: 02/05/2013 - 07:52 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: mo1427 Anonymous

Oh my goodness I didn't expect that. So glad that Adam is going to be ok.



Author's Response:

I'm glad Adam is going to be ok too, mo1427. Thanks for reading the story and reviewing it.

Date: 02/05/2013 - 03:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed
Excellent story but it ended way too soon!

Author's Response:

Thanks for your review, cma, and for reading the story.

Date: 02/05/2013 - 12:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: BettyHT Anonymous

Wow -- never expected that!  Good story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Betty. I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Date: 02/05/2013 - 09:21 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: dusty Signed

Now, that's how to shock a reader! Very good, well written story. The reaction of Hoss   seems authentic and fully in character. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, Dusty. I'm glad you like and that Hoss seems real to you in the story.

Date: 02/05/2013 - 02:57 am [Report This]
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