A nice poignant story
I was thinking this was going to be a death fiction, but the ending turned out to be a happy one. It was good to see how the family reacted to Adam's return home from college.
The middle bit scared me I thought my beloved Adam was going to die.
The end so lovely
Gillie, I'm glad the story made you feel that. I appreciate your time in reading and reviewing it.
beautiful written story and I enjoyed it
Thanks a lot for reading, Pam. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Wow, I sure didn't see that coming! Very interesting story.
ljac, thanks so much for reading it, and taking the time to leave a review. It is much appreciated.
Poor Hoss, very good story, thanks
Yes, poor Hoss carried a big weight, Bertha. Thanks as always for reading.
Oh my goodness I didn't expect that. So glad that Adam is going to be ok.
I'm glad Adam is going to be ok too, mo1427. Thanks for reading the story and reviewing it.
Thanks for your review, cma, and for reading the story.
Wow -- never expected that! Good story.
Thank you, Betty. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Now, that's how to shock a reader! Very good, well written story. The reaction of Hoss seems authentic and fully in character.
Thanks, Dusty. I'm glad you like and that Hoss seems real to you in the story.