You showed us another side of Ben, but it matched into the story. This sequel is just as well as the first part. An exciting adventure with a poor Adam in trouble. Lilyah and Chai are a fantastic team and they rescue Adam. My compliments again for this great sequel.
The character of Ben we are used to was changed here quite negatively. He hopefully change and comes back to himself.
You created a very great tension. There are so many scenes well written and touch my heart, even filled my eyes with tears.
I drooped everything again to read this sequel.
Ben is so selfish...I don't like him in your story.
I hope Lil and Adam will have their own life....I hope.
oh boy....I'm with them in the cave...excellent description of what they can endure.
wow...stunning ! I love your characters. bravo again :)
wow...I'm speechless. Excellent ! Poor Adam...never give up...and Lil arrives to rescue him.
bravo ! :)
poor Adam....I hope he'll be fine, I hope someone will help him. Maybe Lil with Chai, maybe mariah ?
What a great story !!!
wow....impressive...Like I say at the end od the others part, it's one of the better story I ever read. Ben is so selfish....
This was a great story with so many ups and downs. Glad that Adam is better and is now going after Lilyah. Can't wait to read the next installment.
My heart goes out to Lilyah. She truely loves Adam and now she is leaving. If only Adam could let go with what is going on within him and follow his heart.
I feel for both Ben and Lilyah. They care so much for Adam. Hope he recovers soon.
Glad everyone is back at the Ponderosa. Hope Ben realises what all Lilyah did for Adam and gives her a chance.
Glad Joe found Lilyah and Adam and was able to get them back to the Ponderosa. Hop Sing is so good at caring for them. Hope Joe gets back with the Dr soon.
They are getting close to finding Adam and Lilyah. Hope Adam can hold out riding Chai.
Adam is getting stronger and Lily was able to fix something for him to eat. Chai is a good protector.
Adam seems to be getting better. Hope Joe and Frank can find them and soon.
Adam has been through so much. Hope help comes soon. Good that Lilyah and Chai are looking out for him.
Oh my goodness this chapter had me on edge. Glad that Lilyah found Adam. Hope Chai is going to be ok.
Those bad men better watch out. It isn't a good thing to deal with Lilyah and Chai when they are upset.
Hope Clem can get to Adam before Lilyah gets there. She needs to realise that they need all the help they can get to rescue Adam.
This is terrible!! Why are these men doing these horrible things to Adam. Hope someone finds him before it is too late.
Oh this isn't good. Lilyah loses her temper with Ben and storms off. Now Adam is in trouble. Hope help comes before it is too late.
Glad Adam found Lilyah and they were able to work things out.