This was the longest story I've read and it was at no time boring. It was a wonderful, amazing, interesting and humorous story. You have created a great character with Lilyah. I'm curious how it goes on. My compliments to you.
Amazing story. Very interesting characters. Fun to read. And I have given Ben a nickname: The shouter.
It is a while ago that I started reading and could not stop. Have read all chapters in a row even through the night.
I read all these 32 chapters : It's one of the better story i've ever read. I love it. Adventure, love, fight....I love the way you describe Adam's character....I love Lil and Chai....wonderful. Congratulations.
I enjoyed this story and seeing the relationship grow between Adam and Lilyah. Hope with time Ben can get over his issues that he has with her. Looking forward to reading the next installment.
Leave it to Chai to create a ruckus in Virginia City. There is never a dull moment here.
Something fishy is going on here. Now sure what it is yet. Glad Adam and Lilyah got the herd back to the Ponderosa plain. Can't believe that Lew Benson did what they are accusing him of.
Glad they found those cows. Wonder who had them up there? Hope Adam and Lilyah can get them to the valley ok.
Looks like they are having a great time on their trip. Hope Adam and Ben can work things out when they get back.
It is good to see Adam so happy. Lilyah sure brings out the best in him.
Hoping that Ben will warm up to Lilyah. Maybe it is a good thing that they are going on that trip. Hopefully the snipers will be caught soon.
Oh no!!! Who could be shooting at Adam? Hope Little Joe catches them.
This is so sad to see the trouble between Adam and Ben. Ben is being so difficult about the whole thing. Hope they can work through this.
Hate to see Adam and Ben at odds. It isn't Lilyah's fault for what happened before she is born. I wish that Ben could get past his prejudice.
Everything is ok between Adam and Lilyah now. She is such a good teacher with the horses and I think Adam is loving the time they have together. Now if only Ben can get past what he is feeling then it would be even better.
Oh my goodness, glad that they made it back to the Pondersosa. Ben and Adam looked so ashame. Should be interesting to see how this all works out. Hope Ben will realise that he is wrong about Lilyah.
Finally they are on the way back to the Ponderosa. I am worried about Adam and hope things can be resolved when it is all out in the open.
I hate to see Adam in so much pain. If he only knew the truth. Sure hope Lilyah can find what she is looking for.
Boy is this a mess. Joe and Lilyah need to get back and soon!!!
Ben and Adam acting so out of character and in so much pain. I wish Joe and Lilyah were there to straighten all this confusion and misunderstanding. If only They knew what Little Joe and Lilyah were doing they would feel bad. Hope Ben and Adam can sit down and talk this through and get things resolved between them.
Boy is this a mess. Never seen Adam like this. Looks like Joe and Lilyah's plan is going to fall apart. Leave it to Hoss to be the voice of reason.
Uh oh, sure hope Roy doesn't throw a monkey wrench into Little Joe and Lilyah's plans.
I wish Ben hadn't reacted the way he did. Hope that Joe and Lilyah can put their plan off to get Adam his birthday present.
When will Adam ever learn not to get Lilyah all riled up and now Ben has caught the brunt of it and he isn't very happy!
I see that Lilyah is giving Adam a chance. However it looks like Ben is still struggling with how he feels.
Oh boy is things getting good. Poor Ben, he don't know what to think and Hop Sing is all fired up. Hoss and Little Joe is sitting back and enjoying all the drama.