Complex story. Well done.
Now what happened to allow Adam to forgive her? The last part confused me so I hope the next part has the answers
Such a lovely romance after such a terrible tragedy.
Hope Savannah gets the answers she is looking for. Great story.
Oh my goodness I didn't expect all this and it was a shock that Savannah married some one else and now her granddaughter is on the way to America with the diary. On to the next chapter.
This is a beautiful story and Savannah sounds like she is what Adam needs. Looking forward to the next chapter.
A very sweet love story. I like it very much.
Elizabeth has a lot of courage to come to Virginia City on her own and isn't afraid of a Cartwright challenge, just like the other Cartwrights. Thanks for sharing.
Bittersweet and moving story. Thanks for sharing.
Savannah sounds like just the right kind of girl for Adam. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for this story. It is hard to think of the Cs as being gone, but your story was very interesting.
Interesting story! I enjoyed it very much.
I really like this character! She seems to be sweet and a little devilish - just what Adam needs! Thanks for writing!
Oh no the story ends...good story a what happened after the series ended...
THE figth between the wives...funny.
Oh the Cartwright curse took Sue...but it brought him Savannah...good start!
A wonderful start to an Adam Relationship. Good work! :o)
Oh, my goodness. I didn't realize this was a work in progress. I hope you will let us know when the next installment will be available. I hate being left out of the loop.
Author's Response: Hey Lillian, first of all thanks for the eview. I am sorry you haven't realized it is a continuing story. It is updated now.
Savannah Tanner Holton - that was a shocker! The diary issue is a a big no-no!
The ensuring "ghost" story was a bit eerie, but very understandable - knowing what we do about Inger and Marie and how they loved Ben's sons as their own.
Thanks for a beautiful chapter.
What a beautiful love story. Obstacles to overcome. Pure emotion overwhelming a person to the point that he becomes prisoner to those very feelings that he needs to set him free.
I love how Hoss senses his brother's loneliness and tries to help him.
Very moving story...thanks
Author's Response: Thanks attiecat.
Author's Response: Wow,Beel. No I'm under pressure :-)
Author's Response: Thanks weavereb. It means a lo to me.
Author's Response: Thank you swgirl, I hope you will like the following two chapters, too.