A sad story and certainly some skeletons buried in the cupboard for Adam to find. Thank you.
A sad and tragic tale very well written. Thank you.
Enjoyed reading this story. Never dreamed that Adam and Rachael were married at a young age. I could feel the shock and pain that Adam felt when she told him about the baby.
This story is a great and wonderful story. It mad me want to cry when Racheal told Adam that her husband had murdered their baby.
Thank you so much, pam.
I read this a long time ago on another site probably Bonanza World and have to admit had forgotten it. So reading it again here was almost like reading it for the first time. You capture the sense of betrayal so well through Joe learning about the past events, Rachel trying to explain her actions and Adam's discovery of the lost child. I felt for all the characters caught up in this tragedy even Ben as he tries at the end to decide if he had acted for the best. Thank you for sharing this beautifully told story.
Thank you very much Englishgirl.
This is such a sad story but very well written. I enjoyed it very much.
Thank you OhAdam
Great story. My heart goes out to Adam.
Thank you dawnmarie
oh, what a sad story...good job Cowgirl!
Thank you Angelface1961
What a heartbreaking story. You did a good job,putting in just the right emotions. Enjoyed reading it.
Thank you mysterygirl
Heavy story! I enjoyed reading it! Thanks for writing.
Excellent story, very powerful. Thank you for sharing.
Thank you pkmoonshine.
Author's Response: That is so true weavereb. I really struggled with writing this story.
Author's Response: Thanks Terina for leaving such a nice review
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Wow....what a story.......I've never read anything quite like it! You've done a very good job; I like the poem at the first, very touching.
A different kind of storyline here, one I've not seen before.....and I liked it very much!
Author's Response: Threem, thank you so much for that wonderful review.
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What a poignant story. How very sad for everyone involved. Well written and beautifully penned. Thank you.
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Author's Response: Thanks LifesMagic. It's very encouraging hearing those words. Thanks again. And yes it must have been an unbearable pain, a pain I never wish anyone in the world.