This was truly terrifying! What an evil witch! How could she do such a thing to Virginia City, especially that poor little boy?! Truly a nightmare for anyone, particularly Doc Martin.
Oh that was scary. Would love to see more on this story. Enjoyed reading it very much!!
Spooky. Now just what will the doctor have to do?
Very good story with Doc Martin!! I enjoyed reading it and spiders are so scary!!
Poor Felix. Witches, spiders and other creepies kept me on edge throughout the entire story. Your word choices were execellent and, well, scary. Doc Martin makes the perfect hero. Thanks!
Great to see a story with Doc Martin. Very scary and creepy that's for sure. Great job with the challenge!
NIce for Doc martin to have a key part...loved Hoss and the impending birth of kittens..The psider bit at the end made me wince..First story?? Great job..More please.
I love the fact you wrote a story featuring Dr. Martin, he's my favorite Cartwright friend. Didn't expect the ending, tho. Thanks.
Creepy story! Spiders really freak me out! You had a very creative take on this though! I enjoyed reading it!
ewwww spiders--squicky the only thing missing was a clown *shudders* Good Job!
Really creepy story. I wonder what payment the doc has to make. Well done
One very creepy crawly story! Good job!
eweeeee I don't like spiders!!!!! That was very scary to me ohhh I have shivers and goose bumps.
Okay. EEEEEEwww. I hate spiders. If I had gotten that as a prompt, I would have had to beg out of the challenge. I can't even believe I read this story!
Creepy, sad - I felt so badly for Doc Martin - he wanted to help everyone.
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Quite the telling of magic and transformations and all types of horrors--with no way out. Wonder what the payment favor was going to be.
Eeek! This is one scary story. I like the way you portrayed Doc Martin and his wife and the heart wrenching scene with the little boy and his mother almost had me in tears.
That witch is one scary woman, poor Felix, what a poor reward for his service.
Great writing, Relsie, I enjoyed it very much.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! I have a tendency to write sad scenes in my stories :) I'm happy you thought it was scary!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you thought it was scary. I definately don't like spiders!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading it! :)