Wow, now that's a scary story. The ending was very good and just what the story needed.
Wow, that was a scary and very tense story. Great job. I enjoyed it very much.
Great writing. I enjoyed reading it very much.
Wonderful story and great writting! Thank you for sharing!! :D
You had me all along, great story. The dialogue between the brothers is wonderful. Thanks for such a scary story. Happy Halloween!
The title alone grabbed my attention. You had such tension and build up. This was definitely creepy! Great job!
The wisdom of Ben...tells a lot about our gentle giant and where he gets his wisdom from. Great job!
Very powerful story Ping! Scared the heck out of me! You did an excellent job weaving in all the elements. Plus while it was a very scary story, you still managed to keep a sense of love and family throughout. Ben and Hoss, Alec and Ellie, Hoss's love for his friend Alec.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed my story.
Wow ping, that was scary. I have never been able to watch a zombie in a show or movie and now I know why. I am glad Hoss did what he did to save Adam.
Author's Response: Hope I didn't scare you to badly. Thanks for reading.
Author's Response: Since it was your fault I wrote this, bahj, I hope you are scared for a month. Just kidding. Thanks for the wonderful "Halloween Nightmares" challenge. I look forward to more.
That was one action packed scary story that had me at the edge of my seat. Had me scared for Ben & Joe but liked the way you got Hoss to save the day.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. Thanks for reading.
Wow. I'm locking my doors immediately!
I love scary stories and this one is full of twists and turns and action and fear!
Author's Response: I hope my scary story lived up to your love of scary stories. Thanks for reading.
This was one terror filled story....zombies...the tension built up and ran fast from the first sentence, l wanted to stop reading but l couldn't l had to make sure everyone was safe...no better man than Hoss to save his brother and the day.
Author's Response: Thanks for staying through the whole story to make sure everyone was safe. Hope I didn't scare you too badly :o)
Terrific story, it had me on tenterhooks the whole time and I really feared for Ben and Joe in that stable. Your description of that particular scene was amazing, I could hear the wretched things growling and pulling at the boards.
I think I'm going to have nightmares after reading this. Zombies really scare me. Awesome!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading. The barn scene was one of my favorites to write. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Well, it wasn't as I expected it would be. You certainly threw in quite a bit of suspense and used your words to the full extent the "law" allows. A vivid telling.
Author's Response: I hope it was good that it wasn't as you expected. I felt the story was a little over the top, but I had fun writing it. Thanks for reading.
Author's Response: You're welcome.
Wow, this is a great story. I love how it took Hoss, of all people, to save the soul of a friend and his family. Great job. Love how the emotions pour through the story at the same time as the horror.
Author's Response: Im so glad you liked my story. It wasn't easy making Hoss the hero of a horror story, but I'm glad it came across well.