Adam needed rest after the harrowing experience he'd been through, thinking all that time that their father was dead. I really enjoyed this one.
Nice story. Touching.
I can see this scene playing out in my mind. Definitely wish it'd been in the episode. Great job, Lornesgirl!
What a lovely addition to "the Legacy". I could totally see this being part of that episode; wonderful job!
This is a wonderful rendering of how Adam would have felt first thinking his father dead and then being so relieved to find him alive. Well done.
I enjoyed this story and loved when Adam realized that Ben wasn't dead. Ben is so lucky to have a son like Adam.
Great part to the episode. I always wondered about Adam coming home too and finding Ben. Thanks for sharing with us
Thank you, Pam. :)
A wonderful idea! Wish we could have seen this scene also!
I am very touched, thank you jmd29.
Great addition to The Legacy! Very realistic, i think, to what actually happened! I like how you tell the story through dialogue. Thanks for posting your story here!
Thank you Gillie. I'm glad you thought it was realistic enough. I try to keep to how the Cartwrights on Bonanza would have acted in this situation. Thank you so much for taking the time to read my story.
I am so glad you wrote this missing scene, Lorne's Girl. I really like the episode, and can just see this one play out in my mind. It's really good.
Thank you so much TLR. I really appricitate it.
very good, thankyou
Thank you Bertha.
Great glimpse into Adam's reunion. I like that you choose to let Adam mourn aftr he got to the house. That would have been when it would hit him hardest, realizing that Ben would never welcome him home again. Bravo!
Thanks ang. :) Writing from Adam's point of view was harder for me than writing for Ben's, but I'm glad you enjoyed it.