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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

This is a fantastic story told very well. 

 Adam seemed to live a life of truth and this was a perfect story for him.  I can't even imagine another C in his place.  This was his story.

Maybe he seen a little of himself in the man.  Maybe he identified with the man's tenacity and quest for justice.  Hmm...

You have a beautiful writing style.  Poetic at times.

As I was reading, I kept thinking how much Pernell would have loved to be in a story like this.

You didn't shy away from the truth. but you handled it with dignity and grace. 



Date: 05/28/2019 - 07:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Plato of the Ponderosa Signed

This reminds me of Paiute War: conflict between the tribes and the soldiers, with Adam held hostage in the middle of it all and his worried family trying to save him before it's too late.... 

The language is beautiful and haunting. You cast a noble light over the last hours of these desperate men who know their way of life is coming to an end, men who would rather die with their heritage than live on without it. Even as they brutalize Adam, you cannot help but feel their grief. 

Well done, EPM. 

Date: 08/29/2017 - 07:11 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

What a sad story, but there's so much truth in it. I'm glad Adam survived, but I liked the characters you created. They were strong and determined. 

Date: 08/19/2017 - 05:51 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: mo1427 Anonymous

That was so sad to read. Even though the Indians did what they did. I felt sorry for them. Hope they are at peace now.

Author's Response:

Yes, it was very sad. Thank you for leaving a note.


Date: 09/15/2013 - 02:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

Great imagery a good exploration of the feeling the C's have for one another. 

He did not know if he was trying to hold his sons back or trying to hold himself upright.

Love this image, it shows the support you give to others also supports you, something the C's know well.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed my story.


Date: 07/28/2012 - 03:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: PERNELLSulli Signed

I read the story the second time,but it doesn´t all your stories very much and I think it won´t be the last time I come to are an excellent writer and glad that you   write Adam ff.Great job...

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Date: 04/10/2012 - 02:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: littlemom256 Signed

great story.  I liked that he wanted Adam to tell his 'son and his son' of their history with the land. 

Author's Response:

Thank you--I'm glad you enjoyed my story.


Date: 04/01/2012 - 03:10 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: smarti Signed

I really enjoyed your story and found it very touching.  I'm wondering if the warriors sacrificed themselves since none of the Cartwrights or Calvary men were killed.  I'm so glad that the Cartwrights wanted them buried on the land of their ancestors.  Thanks for sharing!

Author's Response:

I think that that's what I meant to convey. They knew their only chance for survival was to return to the reservation and that's something they could not do. Thank you for reading my story and leaving a comment.


Date: 03/31/2012 - 07:41 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: BensReader Signed

Good story. It held my interest and of course, Adam was spared. I enjoyed your story.

Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know you enjoyed my story.


Date: 03/25/2012 - 04:03 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Englishgirl Signed

I think this must have been one of the first stories of yours I read a long time ago.

It is very moving and the ending very sad. Whenever I read it I always think of the episode Breed of Violence. Thank you for such a thoughtful story.

Author's Response:

You are welcome.


Date: 03/24/2012 - 12:16 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: lady cat Signed

I too have read this story before.What a sweet and sad ending.

It's worth the read.

Author's Response:

Thank tou and thank you for for leaving a note.


Date: 03/23/2012 - 11:58 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: cma Signed

Excellent. I've read this story before but the second time was just as sweet as the first.

Author's Response:

What a nice thing to say!  And thank you being kind enough to leave a comment.


Date: 03/22/2012 - 12:39 pm [Report This]
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