Great story, Meg! I tried to do the reviews chapter by chapter since that's how you laid it out, but I'm not sure if the site is showing that very well. Well, no matter...this is the review for after the ending. Wonderful how the Cartwrights, including the "little sister" always manage to let the love between them prevail. I really enjoyed reading your work!
Chapter 5 and 6...I love how you are letting the story uhfold one chapter at a time. And you write in such a way that I really don't know for sure what's going to happen next! Well done!
Chapter 4: Ooh...things are going from bad to worse! I am wondering now who's going to step up to the plate to say the day!
Wow! That's a wonderful reaction for Ben to have! He's being protective of his daughter also...but I'm hoping in a slightly different way tham the "brothers" are handing things.
I love the way you set the story up! I can see there's more conflict ahead...but I am not sure exactly how it's going to unfold!! Well done!!!
"Mess with me all you want I dare ya but don't you dare mess with my family. You know what my brothers are just as protective of me as I am of them so consider yourself warned if you ever mess with my brothers or my Pa you're gonna have to answer to me" threaten Amelia sharply.
True Cartwirght spirit
A very wonderful story. I like it
thank you for your review and for reading my story. this was the first Amelia story i had written which got me started to make a series of her. more stories are coming soon