You have written an interesting and exciting story. Fortunately Adam's instincts were good and he was just in time to rescue his beloved daughter.
Wow, that was a great story. Full of tension and worry. Well written.
What a story. I enjoyed it very much. So glad Adam was able to rescue his daughter!!!
Loved it, you have quite a talent for suspense. I like the way you write, though something about the format of the actual paragraphs seems off. But amazing and very potent.
What a thriller! Good job!
Wow. Great story. I am glad Adam was able to get Rachel back!
wow that was a wonderful story I enjoyed reading it
I always enjoy stories depicting Adam with a family. So glad he was able to rescue his daughter in time. Terrific story.
When I read the last paragraph, I realized I was holding my breath, I thought Hank had done the unthinkable to Rachel. Wonderful and different story for Adam and family. Thanks for sharing.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! I hoped that people would think a little differently here, and acknowledge the possibility of darkness...;)
Wow, that was really intense! Made me wonder about a lot of things beyond the story! Have you written others about Rachel, Nova, and Adam? Great story-telling. You absolutely had my attention!
Thank you very much! :) I have not written anything about them, no. Just a one-timer. :) Glad to know you enjoyed it!
Wow definitely intense a real challenge for Adam and Nova to help their daughter. Well wrritten.
Thank you very much! :)
This story was certainly a dark one! Wish it could have ended on a lighter note and that no one had gotten killed.
I'm sorry...but sometimes darkness needs a viewing, too. :) Hope it wasn't too awful for you!