Hey!! I decided to place my(rather long!) comment on this story in particular because it is my favorite out of all of the stories in the Adam and Jenna series. Let me just say first that I adore Jenna! Such a sweet, kind, caring and loving soul that merges perfectly into Adam's! He is such a mystery, that man! He needs a woman who is, above all, observant and considerate of him and his feelings. As I have found and read the dozens of different takes of futuristic Bonanza concerning Adam and his journey toward wedded bliss, I have realized that though each one of the women he admired in the Golden Years of Bonanza--Sue Ellen, Regina, Ruth, Rebecca, Laura, Anne and even Isabella, Lotta, and Adah(to name a few)--fitted into each stage of his life in a seamless way, none of them was his soulmate. Even Ruth, the only lucky girl to receive a heartfelt proposal from him, couldn't trust him enough to allow him to protect her in his own way and allow him to walk with her through that trial. Jenna is the opitome of a splendid wife for Adam and I applaude your depiction of a reasonable conclusion to the rather depressing storyline that David Dortort and his writers saw fit to produce. I enjoyed AC and Adam's interaction especially in this story though I feel Adam would have been as close with his son as Ben is with Adam but that's my perfect world and I need to write my own story then!!! Awesome job and I hope I will read more newly released stories soon!!
What a great story. Jenna is so perfect for Adam and I could understand her discomfort upon meeting Laura. Glad that Adam and AC got closer while at the Ponderosa. My heart broke a the ending of the story. Looking forward to the next installment.
Great story about Adam and Jenna. So sad that Hoss passed away.
I absolutely love your stories about Adam and Jenna
I just love Adam and Jenna!! I know we girls at Boomers think of Adam as perfect, but I'm so glad you show that he's not. I love how he can admit when he is wrong (if only all men could do this!) and rectify it.
When I read Laura's name I thought, "do we really need her, of all people," but I liked that part of the story too!
I wasn't thrilled with the ending but only because I like to live in a fairytale where there is only happy endings.
I absolutely love your stories and can't wait to read them all!!
Thank you so much readytogo! Glad you enjoyed it! I couldn't resist exploring the idea of Jenna and Laura meeting. I've always tried to make Jenna the complete opposite of Laura in all ways! LOL
I'll be waitng anxiously, I love this series, thanks
Thanks! My next story with Adam/Jenna is in the WIP section in fanfic in the forums. :)