Love the romance in this story. The fight scene was really good. True to character dialogue throughout.
I enjoyed your story and perception of the C's very much. Well done.
Reviews For Blame It On The Moon
Your OC characters are so interesting. You've given each one their own unique personality. I feel like I know them.
Date: 10/23/2020 - 06:38 pm [Report This]
Adam is such a gentleman. The dinner at the Ponderosa was done very well. Adam is getting serious now.
Date: 10/23/2020 - 06:36 pm [Report This]
I really enjoy the interaction between the brothers. I laughed at Hoss mocking Adam about his love life. Good stuff.
Date: 10/23/2020 - 06:34 pm [Report This]
Alternating between Adam and India's POV is very effective. This gives us a personal view of what each one is feeling about the other.
Date: 10/23/2020 - 06:32 pm [Report This]
You developed the characters and their relationships very well. The late-night talk between Adam and Joe was very good.
Date: 10/23/2020 - 06:30 pm [Report This]
A charming and intriguing story. Nice descriptive writing brings the characters to life. Love all the details.
Date: 10/23/2020 - 06:28 pm [Report This]
You did a nice job with this. Keep writing!
Date: 06/20/2019 - 06:36 pm [Report This]
I have thoroughly enjoyed every chapter, every word!!! You made Adam human. This is the best "Bonanza" story I have ever read!!!! Loved it!!!
Date: 12/23/2013 - 03:20 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: jcg Anonymous
Loved your story--kept me going late into the morning.
I've searched for a story of what happens next--bailing Ben out of jail?
Did you ever get inspiration to contiune this story?
Date: 08/05/2012 - 03:18 pm [Report This]
India sounds like she's channeling Laura--"Don't ask if you're not ready."
Author's Response:
Adamant, I 'm sorry I didn't reply earlier - I've checked back every month or so, but a bunch of your reviews didn't show up until now. The whole email notification problem forum message made me come look over here again and voila! I feel horrible. Please forgive me.
I wasn't aiming for a Laura waffling here, although you're right, the parallel is there a bit in calling him out. A bit of subtle butt kicking, if you will. ;)
Date: 10/30/2010 - 01:48 pm [Report This]
I don't see why Adam couldn't invite India as well. Ben thinks Adam is moving tooo fast? He's so slow he's practically in reverse!
Author's Response:
Hence why she wonders if he's really ready a little later. Although I'm laughing at picturing Adam going in reverse!
Date: 10/30/2010 - 01:44 pm [Report This]
Joe's a jackass.
Author's Response:
And not for the first time...
Date: 10/30/2010 - 01:42 pm [Report This]
So Julia's still in business, huh? I'm surprised Hoss and Adam would indulge Joe in this manner.
Author's Response:
Well, Joe's already in so deep, why not let him hang himself a little more? It's like watching an entertaining trainwreck, perhaps.
Date: 10/30/2010 - 01:40 pm [Report This]
I finally found the time to get back to the story. Not disappointed I did.
Author's Response:
I am deeply, deeply complimented at that, Adamant. Thank you.
Date: 10/30/2010 - 01:39 pm [Report This]
Big Brothers are watching!
Author's Response:
They never let up, do they?
Date: 10/30/2010 - 01:38 pm [Report This]
Very goos scene between India and Patience. I can understand why India would panic at the thought of being left alone with Reggie.
Author's Response:
LOL, yeah, I would too. Her and I have that much in common, at least. :) Thank you, Adamant!
Date: 10/24/2010 - 12:56 pm [Report This]
So, I assume that Wednesday is the day that Joe's plan comes to fruition. You have certainly built up the suspense to discover what Joe's plan is.
Author's Response:
Joe and his plan get messy.... LOL Thank you, Adamant
Date: 10/24/2010 - 12:53 pm [Report This]
I thought, at least from watching the episodes, that a kiss meant an engagement and then marriage??? Get going, Adam!
Author's Response:
The man seems to have problems remembering this rule. Regina got a kiss and a throw away line about not worrying about what other people think... LOL I guess all that matters is what he thinks? For a smart man, he is also bery contentious.... Thank you, Adamant!
Date: 10/24/2010 - 12:51 pm [Report This]
This is an inbteresting turn of events. Is she overwhelmed by his presence?
Author's Response:
Nahhhh, I mean, its only Adam. LOL Thank you, adamant!
Date: 10/24/2010 - 12:48 pm [Report This]
Cute innuendo, "Did you fall," and then, "in a maaner of speaking."
I hope she didn't swoon at the thought of a dinner invitation--or was it the "sweetheart?"
Author's Response:
LOL Adam's sense of humor ... there's innuendo in the series, so I worked it in here and there. :) And it was the chest.... Thank you, adamant!
Date: 10/24/2010 - 12:47 pm [Report This]
Good move on Adam's part. Too bad that his memoroes of Sue Ellen came back. But at least he didn't say he had loved her.
Author's Response:
Well, I don't think that romantic love was really the core of that relationship, although I think he did have affection for her. :) Thank you, adamant
Date: 10/24/2010 - 12:42 pm [Report This]
Okay, so Joe is the man with the plan. Finger's crossed. He might make a very good monk if he got religion.
Author's Response:
(splutter) Joe-gals everywhere shudder.... Thank you, adamant!
Date: 10/24/2010 - 12:40 pm [Report This]
And they lived happily ever after.
So, we don't find out what happened to Ben, huh? LOL
Author's Response:
Well, there's a part two. So it's not not an instant happily ever after...but it's a romance, so at some point, yes, happy ending! Thank you so much, Lillian. Loved your comments; they were very uplifting and insightful!
Date: 10/20/2010 - 07:42 pm [Report This]
What a breath-taking proposal. Ben in Jail? what in heaven's name happened?
Author's Response:
LOL Ben in jail. Wasn't going to say at all and just leave it, but the reason is mentioned in the second part. Ben is still no push-over. LOL And what a way to propose. Poor guy. Heck of a day. Thank you, Lillian!
Date: 10/20/2010 - 07:40 pm [Report This]