A frightening situation with many moving parts and people in various locations and yet you write these scenes with precision. Your characters never lose focus on what is before them.
I absolutely love the words in italics and the hidden gems inside them, just waiting to be revealed at the precise moment. The way you dispersed them throughout your story is exceptional. Great writing!
This is a real deep-dive into the hearts and souls of all of them. Ben, Adam, Hoss and Little Joe.
I love the tons of details you put in this story...how simply pouring a glass of brandy can be done with so much love.
I could easily envision this as a little Bonanza mini-series. It's that good. It's that rich.
I recommend this to everyone.
This is a beautiful story told in a beautiful way.
Thank you, Tahoe Lee, for your kind words.