Poor Joe - what a crazy dream!
What a clever idea! It really keeps the reader on their toes. Joe makes the perfect protagonist for the story.
You had me laughing out loud more then a few times! :) My favorite is
“The ones who were here. We were playing poker. I had five of a kind.”
“There’s no such thing as five of a kind,” said Adam.
I could see them actually having this conversation!
Very silly and funny, but then very clever too when we finally found out what was happening! Enjoyed it! Thanks Patina.
Thank you, Sheena! When I wrote the first line as part of a "worst opening line challenge" I started giggling. This story flowed on out. I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed it!
This sounds just like some crazy thing Joe would get involved in. Funny story, patina.
Thank you, mysterygirl. Only Joe, right? LOL I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this story.
Too funny Patina...I'm with Joe, What happened to the money?
Thank you, AF. As for the money--guess we'll never know since the book burned up. ;)
Apparently dream sequences are a panacea for many a situation...LOL
The drama you set up was perfectly blended with the comedic asides and together they created a terrific story.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Thank you so much, Lillian! Maybe it's a good thing Joe woke up when he did (lol). This was a fun story to write and I'm pleased to know you enjoyed it.
Great story Patina
Thank you, pam.
Very creative and very funny, Patina! Loved it! Thanks for sharing it!
Thank you, AG! I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed this story.
Oh Patina, too many funny bit to list. Poor chief, the victim of the blue dress curse. Sounds like those marauding Indians were taking everything that wasn't nailed down. I was wondering how Joe was going to get himself out of that one. Great story, thanks for sharing.
The blue dress strikes again....and again and again (lol). I'm so pleased to know you enjoyed this silly tale.
Thank you for all of your encouragement and support! It really means a lot.
OMG! The blue dress rears it's ugly hem again!
Thank you, Tracy. I couldn't resist the blue dress curse (lol).