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Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

Well that was scary...poor Joe.

Enjoyed it immensley, you certainly know how to keep the tension tight.

Date: 04/29/2012 - 04:46 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

OMG you  have me biting my nails sitting on the edge of my seat...someone's gotta help Joe

Date: 04/29/2012 - 04:37 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

The tension is really building, now he is missing...whn

Date: 04/29/2012 - 04:24 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

It's pretty scary, has he been taken over...or is it his own anger, fear.

Date: 04/29/2012 - 04:17 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

Something going on out of Joe's control...teenage angst, emotion...as long as he doesn't become a weirwolf or vampire l'm staying.

Date: 04/29/2012 - 04:02 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

Not sure where this is going but by the title it must be getting a bit spooky...and it is

Date: 04/29/2012 - 03:18 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

Wow, it throws you right into the thick of it...although being totally prejudice l cannot see Little Joe ever being  nothing other than 'fit' and handsome...but l have been bitten so l will read on.

Date: 04/29/2012 - 03:09 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Riviting story-telling!

Date: 04/13/2012 - 05:19 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Wow, what a wonderful intense story!  A bit scary wtih the angry spirit and all!  Great writing and great story-telling.  I am really glad you brought it to a happy ending. Thanks for sharing your writing with us!

Date: 04/13/2012 - 05:19 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Wow, what a wonderful intense story!  A bit scary wtih the angry spirit and all!  Great writing and great story-telling.  I am really glad you brought it to a happy ending. Thanks for sharing your writing with us!

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:34 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Riviting story-telling!

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:29 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

I hope they find Joe and help him get to the bottom of the problem soon!  I'm feeling like I'm on the roller coaster with the Cartwrights!

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:27 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Ghosts?  

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:23 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Whoa...Joe's emotions are really spiraling out of control.  Pa seems to be unusually patient with him.  I hope things settle down soon!  Next chapter...

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:19 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Fork and spoon on floor!  Hmmmmm....  I do wish that Joe would confide in Ben.  It would certainly make life so much easier in a hurry!  Looking forward to chapter 3.

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:12 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Fork and spoon on floor!  Hmmmmm....  I do wish that Joe would confide in Ben.  It would certainly make life so much easier in a hurry!  Looking forward to chapter 3.

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:12 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Gillie Signed

Wow, I am totally hooked!  Great dialog and compelling action make this a GREAT story!  Next chapter....can't wait...!

Date: 04/13/2012 - 04:06 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: MarieD Signed

Good spooky story

Date: 03/15/2011 - 07:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

Good writing, your descriptions mad ethe story more intense...you could feel poor Joe's anguish.

Date: 01/08/2011 - 01:34 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

Dang...its getting spooky  good job PK!

Date: 01/08/2011 - 01:30 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

Wow Pk it is getting more suspenseful...Little Joe where are you?

Date: 01/08/2011 - 01:27 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

Pk what the heck is going on? Poor Little Joe good story telling btw.

Date: 01/08/2011 - 01:22 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

It is so hard to be 13 years old...the hormones and then the lies and whatever else is going on.  Poor guy.

Date: 01/08/2011 - 01:16 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

Ok either Joe is too emotionally upset to noptice or something else is going on...poor Joe  ya gotta tells omeone pretty soon or you are gonna lose it. Good job PK

Date: 01/08/2011 - 01:09 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Angelface1961 Signed

Dang Joe...sometimes ya just gotta walk away.  Good start PK

Date: 01/08/2011 - 01:03 am [Report This]
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