KatieC, what an amazing story! You have created a classic haunting tale which prompts the reader to think hard on the 'are there or are there not ghosts'. I know you gave been led by the prompts which you used cleverly but the eerie strangeness hand in hand with everyday reality adds depth...I couldn't waste a word and felt a sad loss at the final punctuation mark. Kudos to you.
Thank you for your kind words, ansi! ♥