"Old smarty pants" fits Adam to a T"Nice to see Hoss in control once and awhile,making older brother see beyhond his nose.Will be reading more,

This is a riveting and "page-turner" of a story with cliffhangers at the end of some of the chapters. I enjoyed reading it. The use of a "legend" certainly made for some exciting scenes. The Cartwrights sure have a tight bond of love for each other, and your story shows that very well. I like all of the family moments. Very touching, and very nice!

Wow. An intense chapter with another cliffhanger.

Wow, that's an intense chapter. It ends with a cliffhanger. The story is getting scary.

A nice father/son moment here. Ben sure loves his boys.

Wow! An intense chapter that ends with a cliffhanger!

Very suspenseful chapter. I like that Ben feels strongly that he needs to be home. He senses things about his boys.

This is a riveting opening chapter. Looks to be a brothers story. I just love those three guys.

Since this story is a little bit long it may take me a couple of days or so to read it.

Great start!  :)

I really did enjoy this story.  Little Joe did exactly what we thought he would do; rush ahead to help a friend.  Thank you for all your hard work.