Nice story so far, can't wait to finish the other chapters.

This is a riveting story with intense moments and deep family moments. It's a "page turner" of a story that neatly pulls in references to different episodes.

The Cartwrights have each been dealing with some kind of loss for the past several months. Will they pull together as a family when one of them suddenly goes missing? Will good triumph over evil?

More intense moments. Also deep family moments.

This is a very intense chapter. It's a "page turner" for sure.

Deep moments in this chapter. I like the father/son moment at the end.

This is a very intense and riveting chapter.

Wow. Lot's of foreshadowing and foreboding in this chapter.

This is a very intense chapter! What will happen next?

This chapter has powerful family moments. Beautiful and touching.

A very intense chapter. More foreboding.

Deep family moments.

Wow! Things are getting more intense. Chapter ends with quite a cliffhanger.

There's a sense of foreboding. What's going to happen next?

Wow. Great opening chapter. Very poignant. I can really feel the turmoil that each Cartwright is experiencing.

Being that this story is one of your longer ones it may take me a few days to read it all. I look forward to reading the whole thing.

I love how you merged five episodes into one electrifying tale.

I like how each Cartwright in search of Joe has his own story to tell, his own demons to deal with.

Tears at the possible loss. This is good writing. 

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great adventure, the characters and dialogue are true to the series.

A great read.