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Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: mkhoss Signed

Nice story so far, can't wait to finish the other chapters.

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I hope you enjoy it all. 

Date: 08/28/2022 - 09:39 pm [Report This]
Title: Epilogue Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This is a riveting story with intense moments and deep family moments. It's a "page turner" of a story that neatly pulls in references to different episodes.

The Cartwrights have each been dealing with some kind of loss for the past several months. Will they pull together as a family when one of them suddenly goes missing? Will good triumph over evil?

Author's Response:

Thank you for all your reviews!  Glad you enjoyed it!  

Date: 05/28/2022 - 12:08 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 12 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

More intense moments. Also deep family moments.

Date: 05/27/2022 - 11:42 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 11 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This is a very intense chapter. It's a "page turner" for sure.

Date: 05/27/2022 - 10:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 10 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Deep moments in this chapter. I like the father/son moment at the end.

Date: 05/27/2022 - 06:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 9 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This is a very intense and riveting chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for your reviews.  I have read every one.  I appreciate you taking the time! 

Date: 05/27/2022 - 05:05 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 8 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Wow. Lot's of foreshadowing and foreboding in this chapter.

Date: 05/27/2022 - 03:58 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 7 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This is a very intense chapter! What will happen next?

Date: 05/26/2022 - 12:13 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

This chapter has powerful family moments. Beautiful and touching.

Date: 05/26/2022 - 11:24 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 5 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

A very intense chapter. More foreboding.

Date: 05/23/2022 - 03:21 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Deep family moments.

Date: 05/23/2022 - 02:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 3 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Wow! Things are getting more intense. Chapter ends with quite a cliffhanger.

Date: 05/23/2022 - 01:29 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 2 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

There's a sense of foreboding. What's going to happen next?

Date: 05/22/2022 - 06:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Wow. Great opening chapter. Very poignant. I can really feel the turmoil that each Cartwright is experiencing.

Being that this story is one of your longer ones it may take me a few days to read it all. I look forward to reading the whole thing.

Author's Response:

Thank you for your chapter by chapter reviews.  I hope you enjoy the tale! 

Date: 05/22/2022 - 06:07 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: janet0312 Signed

I love how you merged five episodes into one electrifying tale.

I like how each Cartwright in search of Joe has his own story to tell, his own demons to deal with.

Tears at the possible loss. This is good writing. 

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great adventure, the characters and dialogue are true to the series.

A great read.

Author's Response:

Thank you for taking time to post a review and for your kind words and compliments.  So glad you enjoyed the tale! 

Date: 05/11/2022 - 12:49 pm [Report This]
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