Nice story so far, can't wait to finish the other chapters.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it all.
Nice story so far, can't wait to finish the other chapters.
Thank you! I hope you enjoy it all.
This is a riveting story with intense moments and deep family moments. It's a "page turner" of a story that neatly pulls in references to different episodes.
The Cartwrights have each been dealing with some kind of loss for the past several months. Will they pull together as a family when one of them suddenly goes missing? Will good triumph over evil?
Thank you for all your reviews! Glad you enjoyed it!
More intense moments. Also deep family moments.
This is a very intense chapter. It's a "page turner" for sure.
Deep moments in this chapter. I like the father/son moment at the end.
This is a very intense and riveting chapter.
Thanks for your reviews. I have read every one. I appreciate you taking the time!
Wow. Lot's of foreshadowing and foreboding in this chapter.
This is a very intense chapter! What will happen next?
This chapter has powerful family moments. Beautiful and touching.
A very intense chapter. More foreboding.
Deep family moments.
Wow! Things are getting more intense. Chapter ends with quite a cliffhanger.
There's a sense of foreboding. What's going to happen next?
Wow. Great opening chapter. Very poignant. I can really feel the turmoil that each Cartwright is experiencing.
Being that this story is one of your longer ones it may take me a few days to read it all. I look forward to reading the whole thing.
Thank you for your chapter by chapter reviews. I hope you enjoy the tale!
I love how you merged five episodes into one electrifying tale.
I like how each Cartwright in search of Joe has his own story to tell, his own demons to deal with.
Tears at the possible loss. This is good writing.
I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Great adventure, the characters and dialogue are true to the series.
A great read.
Thank you for taking time to post a review and for your kind words and compliments. So glad you enjoyed the tale!