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Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: tine1 Signed

Thank you for a great Story.

Date: 11/08/2021 - 11:58 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 4 Reviewer: CowgirlAtHeart Signed

What a beautiful story, Marla! I really loved the way you wrote Hop Sing's POV.  Also, that quote from Jeremiah 29 is one of my favorites.  I think you captured the personalities of all the Cartwrights and Hop Sing perfectly, and the suspense was very well done.  I especially thought the line after Hop Sing closes the doors of his shrine and the house was incredibly effective.  His bravery was heroic!  Thank you for a wonderful read.



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking time to leave such a lovely review.  I greatly enjoy writing for Hop Sing as he is a set of 'outside' eyes on the Cartwrights - and a set filled with love! 

Date: 11/04/2021 - 09:30 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bejules Signed

Loved the tale you wove and the inclusion of Hop Sing's boyhood nightmare, leading to him saving 'his' family.  The last line is brilliant!  Great use of your prompt words and the way you used them!  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your kind words and review.  Glad you enjoyed it! 

Date: 10/31/2021 - 07:46 am [Report This]
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