Vivid description brings everything to life in this chilling story.
A desperate situation for Ben. Love the "new" character.
The legend is my favorite part. Intriguing ending with a surprising twist.
Enjoyed reading this one. Nicely done.
Reviews For Journey Home
Ben, as a normally realistic thinker, will surely remember back to this mysterious event many times and wonder if it was just a bad dream, but one in which his life was saved.
I enjoyed reading the story! Well written!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story, Karol. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 01/03/2022 - 03:06 am [Report This]
Ben's kindness was surely well rewarded. An intriguing spooky story, with the myth's and legend being interwoven throughout. An enjoyable read - thank you!
Author's Response: Hi Jules! I'm glad to hear you were intrigued by my story! Thanks for reading!
Date: 11/01/2021 - 02:28 am [Report This]
I loved this story so much! It was spooky and yet so beautiful. The descriptions were all so carefully crafted--I loved the description of the bow and arrows in the firelight. And I really liked the character of Ahiga and the whole legend that Ben learned when he got into town! A wonderful Halloween story!
Author's Response: Good to hear that you really liked this story, Cowgirl. It was a bit arduous to write as I felt I was out there in the snow with Ben! Brrrrr...!! Thanks for reading!
Date: 10/31/2021 - 01:28 pm [Report This]
Such a relief to read about a helpful haunting! The story quietly moves along with weather and setting playing major roles. A lovely, sad tale.
Author's Response: Yep, a helpful haunting! Thanks for reading my story, Elizabeth! I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/30/2021 - 08:17 pm [Report This]
Quite a haunting tale. Enjoyed it. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks for reading my story, Marla. Haunting for Halloween! Glad you enjoyed it!
Date: 10/29/2021 - 09:29 pm [Report This]