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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bejules Signed

A very scary situation for a young girl to find herself in, especially coming face to face with such a creature; then only to realise it was actually Roy!  Thanks for a spooky read!



Author's Response:

You're welcome, Jules! And Thank you! As I had mentioned, I went a different route with it! I'm happy with how it turned out! I'm glad you liked it! :)

Date: 11/01/2021 - 06:43 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: CowgirlAtHeart Signed

Wow!  This was incredibly scary!  Without giving away too much about the plot, I will say I was really relieved when the plot twist came!  I really like your portrayal of Hoss's daughter--she is a kind and brave little girl!  Also I love that Roy is "Uncle Roy" to her.  Wonderful job!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, CAT! I'm glad you found it scary! Writing that kind of fiction isn't my forte, so it's nice when I can get it right! And Thank you for saying that re Hannah! I do my best with her, and try to keep her connected to everyone important to her family, like "Uncle Roy"! ;) Thanks again! 

Date: 10/31/2021 - 04:22 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elizabeth Holmes Signed

 The story involves the reader from the first sentence and while it doesn't have the usual type of conclusion, leaving a question as to what happens next to Hannah and Roy is interesting and scary in itself.  The conversations are very natural and Hannah sounds exactly like a fourteen year old.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Elizabeth! It took me a while to get this the way I wanted it; it was a challenge for me to write it. Which I like! I'm glad I wrote Hannah how a 14 year old would sound like; it's been years since I was that age, so I had to think back! ;) Thank you again! 

Date: 10/30/2021 - 09:19 pm [Report This]
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