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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

What a lovely surprise for Adam's birthday. Your words created a beautiful atmosphere. I'm so glad he had a day that he will never forget.  A birthday filled with everything he loves.  A time for everyone to celebrate. Hop Sing is a delight.

Well done, Karol!  

 



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you like the birthday story for Adam. I thought a poem by his brothers would be especially pleasing to him, and as a climax something musical. It was also important for me to include the family, including Hop Sing, in the story on this special day.

Thanks for reading and commenting!

Date: 05/29/2021 - 07:56 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Drifter Signed

They really went all out for him, didn't they? Adam is not easy to surprise, but they certainly pulled it off!



Author's Response:

Drifter, I am very glad that you - as announced - read the birthday story! Thank you for your words!

Yes, I think they all could really surprise Adam, who - as you rightly write - is not so easy to surprise. The special location at Lake Tahoe should be a special atmosphere.

Date: 05/27/2021 - 05:09 pm [Report This]
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