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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: bonanza lover Signed

I just loved this story!  The way Ben reacted was exactly as I would have expected him to.  Such a wonderful father and a wonderful man, too.

 

Date: 02/27/2021 - 01:28 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Fanofoldtvshows Signed

This was an amazing story

I really enjoyed reading it

I can see this story happening in my head as I was reading it.

I can see Ben doing what he did in this story,in the TV show

The ending was Sweet.

 

Date: 02/20/2021 - 09:33 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Julianna Signed

Interesting pre -Bonanza tale. You did good in making the scenes tense and then a relief that all was turned out well.. I enjoyed it.

Date: 02/15/2021 - 12:33 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elizabeth Holmes Signed

Wonderful story, mcfair.  Ben knew how to read men, and that is what saved him, that and the Cartwright luck or blessings.   Well written from beginning to end.

Date: 02/14/2021 - 07:40 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Frannie Signed

Omg, that was amazing! Exactly how I pictured Ben in his younger days! I loved it! 😊

Date: 02/14/2021 - 11:46 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Wow! That's an intense nail biting story! I like the sweet ending.

Date: 02/12/2021 - 09:43 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: littlejoenice Signed

Amazing job. Ben was sure convincing if he managed to do all that and still save his sons. I loved the last line,  Like his son, he was safe and content in his Father's arms. Beautiful. A Father's love will find a way to overcome all obstacles if it means getting his sons out of danger.

Date: 02/12/2021 - 09:24 am [Report This]
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