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Title: Fireworks Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

I enjoyed this story so much.

What a great premise.   I started out smiling but by the middle I was laughing and laughed all the way to the hilarious ending.

You highlighted perfectly Hoss' innocence, Joe's energy, Adam's dignity and Ben's hospitality. 😊

As always... great comedic timing.  Well done. 

Highly recommended!

 

Date: 09/16/2020 - 08:56 pm [Report This]
Title: Fireworks Reviewer: Sierras Signed

Oh goodness! This is a delightful little story, and cute too.  Poor Hoss and poor Adam, and that devious Little Joe! This is a very nice and fun brothers story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, Sierras!  I'm pleased to know you enjoyed my story.  

Date: 09/06/2020 - 11:27 pm [Report This]
Title: Fireworks Reviewer: littlejoenice Signed

This story had me laughing all the way. Hoss' mistaken shipment and Joe's mischief were perfectly displayed. I think my two favorite lines were these:

His sunburned face was even redder and his glare alone could have set the Ponderosa’s timber stands ablaze.

She hoped for another glimpse of the man on the staircase. “If that was any indication of the western scenery, I believe I’ll like it very much out here.” 

I can just imagine Adam's humiliation and the guest's interest. Nice story, patina.



Author's Response:

Thank you, LJN!  I giggled while writing so I'm pleased to know you laughed while reading.  Thank you for sharing your favorite lines.  

Date: 09/06/2020 - 03:05 pm [Report This]
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