This is an evocative story, easily visualized, true to the characters and the family relationships, with essential linking quotes from the episode. It is an interesting exploration of Adam’s emotional response to Peggy’s need to know of her father’s death, Laura’s reluctance to deal with the reality, and his own history, all exquisitely woven together. Look for the understated perceptions in this story – they are pearls. Thank you for the reading pleasure.
I'm glad you read my story and I appreciate your comments. I wanted to show Adam having an internal conversation as reality surrounded him. I tried to explore what he remembered about a situation and why. I think it's interesting how people can remember things differently about the same event.
Thanks so much, Bzf.