This is a very interesting story. I thought Katherine and Eden's relationship was a bit strange in the episode. She was over-protective and seemed way too eager to defend him at every turn.
I like the exploration into all of their relationships and the hints at Eden's personality. Very unique, very good.
Adam seen something that day that no one else had seen.
I feel like watching "My Son, My Son" once again with this thought-provoking backstory fresh in my mind.
You did a great job. A picnic is a perfect setting for spring.
I'm glad you find the reationship between the Saunders and the Carwrights as interesting as did I. Katherine was defensive when it came to Eden so I figured it must have started early. And a little episode such as the one that happened in the story, woould explain why Adam is so leery of Eden in "My Son, My Son". I decided Adam would keep the picnic incident to himself because what did he really see? Sometimes one's perception is different than what actually happened and Adam wouldn't want to besmirch Eden's reputation over what could have been benign.
I watched the eisode again before I wrote this and paid particular atention to the things Eden said, Ben's face and Adam's reactions to Katherine, etc.. Thanks, Tahoe Lee, for reading and reviewing.