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Title: Unexpected Guests Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

I enjoyed reading this story very much.  You did a great job in creating and introducing some very interesting characters.  Each one had their own distinctive personality.  I especially like the one who loved the lake.  😉

Without giving anything away; Mr. Potts was a delight.  He reminded me of another character in a famous movie.

The interaction with the Cartwrights was fascinating.  We learn some things about the past as it converges with the present and the future.  Kudos!

This is such a clever idea for a story and you put it all together very nicely.

Well done, littlejoenice!

 



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed reading it, Tahoe! It was a lot of fun and very interesting to develop the characters. 

Date: 03/16/2020 - 10:56 am [Report This]
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