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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Lisal Signed

Wow... What a vivid, lifelike description of an exorcism. Totally scary. A perfect story for Halloween( yes, I am behind in reading).  I enjoyed Adam's concern being so true to character for him... And really enjoyed the twist of having a character that you don't expect to save the day actually save the  day.  An amazing job!

Date: 12/02/2019 - 10:14 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Rosanna Signed

What a shocking and creative story. I really didn't see that direction of the WHN but this suits it great. well done on a great story



Author's Response:

Thank you,Rosanna. I appreciate your time to  read and comment. 

Date: 11/07/2019 - 03:16 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sharry Signed

Wow!  That was super scary right off the bat!

You've written a captivating little story, Pt.  I thought your word assignment was quite challenging.  I don't know what I've have done with the word 'demon'. 

Adam makes an excellent good guy in any story.  I like to read about him in, shall we say. 'unusual' situations?  We get to see a little different side of him that way.  Doc Martin is very much the hero in this one - that man is more or less a natural hero anyway.    

Thank you for a fun, seasonal read.  :)  

 

 




Author's Response:

Thank you, Sharry. I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on it. Will  Cass was never one of my favorite characters so it was easy to see him being taken over by evil.

Date: 11/01/2019 - 09:19 pm [Report This]
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