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Title: Typhoid! Reviewer: Marla Fair Signed

Enjoyed your tale.  Always like a good dose of SJS and brotherly love!  Thanks!!



Author's Response:

I enjoyed writing those parts. The Cartwright brothers were always close, and in every story I do, I try to capture those moments as best I can. Thanks for reading!

Date: 10/04/2019 - 07:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Typhoid! Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

This is a touching, heartwarming and frightening story of brotherly love.  Very good description of the turmoil and distress surrounding everyone.  

I really like the backstory you gave Ben about going back east.  You took the episode "Rain from Heaven" in a whole new direction.  Adding interesting plot twists and putting the Cartwright family front and center.  Good stuff!

I loved the scene by the lake.  Your portrayal was raw and yet so very tender and loving.

I enjoyed reading this story very much.  Good job!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tahoe Lee! I had been a little woried about this one as I wrote it, but it soon fell all into place. Glad you enjoyed it!

Date: 09/20/2019 - 09:14 pm [Report This]
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