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Title: The Left-handed Wife Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

A very good story that I enjoyed reading.

You did a great job in creating the character of Charley and the dialogue you gave him and his mannerisms made him so real. 

I really like the different POV's and how you structured them in your story.  Each one had a unique perspective on what was happening and you highlighted that very well.  It was almost as if you let them be their own person, their own man, with their own feelings and thoughts.

You really delve into the loving but very different relationship that Hoss and Joe have with Adam.  Compelling to read about Joe's feelings - "month to month."

My heart was touched when I read "whispering his name."  So poignant.   I could feel their ache for him.  Good descriptive writing.

Your love for Adam and all the C's really shines through.  His tender heart and their human imperfections make them all the more real and lovable. 

I'd like to give all four of them a hug after reading this.

Well done!

 

Date: 08/17/2019 - 08:01 pm [Report This]
Title: The Left-handed Wife Reviewer: Drifter Signed

It’s a shame the people in town are judging Adam when they likely knew him so many years. I could see Adam had an invisible line with a tough decision to make. Despite the piece starting off dramatic you tie it all together in believable Cartwright fashion.

Date: 07/28/2019 - 02:20 pm [Report This]
Title: The Left-handed Wife Reviewer: Rosanna Signed

that was a very nice story, poor Adam finding love from a women he can't have. I felt Joes pain as well he seemed very hurt by finding out his brother was so close but didn't want to contact his faimly about the fact he had come back from the east. I liked how each family member seemed to take turns telling there side of the story yet it was seemly and still moved the story along at a good pace.



Author's Response:

I so appreciate your kind review.  It really means a lot. I know this story probably isn't everyone's cup of tea since i delved into some unusual areas but I'm glad you found some enjoyment in it.  Very, very thankful you took the time to let me know!

Date: 05/29/2019 - 02:37 am [Report This]
Title: The Left-handed Wife Reviewer: Tracy Signed

Of all the "where Adam went" stories I've read, this one is unique. The perspectivs of Ben, Hoss, Joe, and finally Adam fill in blanks and lay out Ponderosa life after Adam - until the ending. I won't give it away, but I will say the closure left me wondering WHN (What Happens Next) in the life of Adam cartwright and his family. 



Author's Response:

Thank you, Tracy for your encouragement.  It really helped me through this slump.   Unique is a good word - since inadvertently stealing plots terrifies me.  

Date: 05/28/2019 - 01:33 pm [Report This]
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