I found myself wrapped up in this mysterious story of family and justice.
Adam wanted to do the right thing. I love the inner-thoughts of the characters throughout the story, propelling the plot and also giving the reader some key insight into their turmoil and desires. You did this well.
The twists and turns were exciting and surprising. Great details and the action scenes were done with skill. I felt like I was there.
I also like the fact that you don't shy away from things that might make one uneasy.
All for one and one for all. Not only physically but emotionally as well.
A well written story that I highly recommend.
Hi, Tahoe Lee. How nice to hear that you enjoyed the story. Truthfully, I had to think for a moment about the plot of this one. It's been a little while since I wrote it. Eventually, and a little bit at a time, it all came back to me. Yay!
Yes, Adam is always determined to do the right thing. We can count on him for that. He always handles a difficult situation properly, or as best he can. He also seems to deal with a lot of significantly unruly characters over time. :)
I like action stuff in general, so why not include some of it as we go along, right? If you thought it worked, that's great. I like to watch Adam do 'most anything. :)
Not one of the Cartwrights would stand by if anyone went after a family member in lieu of themselves. And we both know Adam would not stand by and allow anyone to take revenge on Joe. Nope, that wouldn't work out for them.
Happy New Year, TL! :)