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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

I enjoyed this story very much.

You created a very unique situation for Adam and Joe.  You write Joe's deep inner-feelings and thoughts very well.  Kudos!

The memory that Hoss shares with Joe is so touching.

Ben's words of wisdom are so true to character. 

The family bond is strong.

Very well done!

 



Author's Response: Thank you, Tahoe Lee. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The family bond between the Cartwrights is something that is very special. Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 05/05/2019 - 06:31 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elizabeth Holmes Signed

Sierras, a wonderful story from Joe's point of view.  I think you captured their relationships very well.  You also are superb at describing action.



Author's Response: Thank you, Elizabeth. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I'm glad you think I captured the Cartwrights' relationships well. I really enjoy the bonds between them. Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 05/01/2019 - 08:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Annie K Cowgirl Signed

I love the brotherly relationship between Adam and Joe--even though they don't seem to get along all that much.

You have the essence of the C's down to a t; I felt as if I could really hear Ben's voice as he was giving Joe advice. And his advice was spot on! 

Over all, this is a great story, well done!



Author's Response: Thank you, Annie. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. I also love the brotherly relationship between Joe and Adam. Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. :)
Date: 04/30/2019 - 06:02 pm [Report This]
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