I enjoyed this story very much.
You created a very unique situation for Adam and Joe. You write Joe's deep inner-feelings and thoughts very well. Kudos!
The memory that Hoss shares with Joe is so touching.
Ben's words of wisdom are so true to character.
The family bond is strong.
Very well done!
Author's Response: Thank you, Tahoe Lee. I'm glad you enjoyed the story. The family bond between the Cartwrights is something that is very special. Thank you for your review. I appreciate it. :)