Ansi, I love your story with the earthy conversation between the Cartwright sons. I was as surprised as they when Ben arrived with the new family member. This was a tough story to write due to the sustained conversation between the three sons. But you did it well, and the story moved along quickly.
Thank you, Elizabeth, your review is appreciated both here and in the forum.
I did wonder had I included too much dialogue and to be honest sometimes I don't know when to stop. I start on a conversation between the brothers and it could lead anywhere. I kind of felt on the sustained wait for their father tempers would shorten.
Glad that you 'loved' the story - that is such an encouraging remark.