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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: littlejoenice Signed

Boy, oh boy! I'm certainly gladd the sheriff was able to tell who was who this time! It would've been real unfair for Ben to wind up in jail a second time because of the same person. And Marian! What was she thinking, hooking up with a man like Meredith?

I'm just glad things worked in the end. Meredith in jail, where he can't pretend to be Ben Cartwright anymore, and Marian finding a respectable job in Virginia City. I have a feeling that Joe is going to be seeing a lot of her.



Author's Response:

LJN,  I'm glad you liked my little story.  It was fun to write.  

Date: 06/26/2019 - 01:35 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: ansinico Signed

To be honest I thought I was reading the wrong story as the prompt title in the forum is 'It Was Always You' but here in the library it's 'Wild Card' - I was under the impression the poem or story had to have the song title as its title ... 

Anyway, that said the story took off at a pace and kept going.  I admit to some confusion but then that is the nature of a doppelganger tale. 

Not wanting to disclose the plot other than a story with Joe and a pretty blonde, it's ten to one that their paths will cross. 

That I hadn't seen the Bradley Meredith episodes was neither here nor there.  This is your story - a story I enjoyed and I admire your bravery at tackling a look-a-like theme. 

Oh, yes - the prompt was there and dealt with aptly. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my story.  Your feedback is always very helpful.

Date: 04/23/2019 - 02:36 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

That's quite an exciting story there. I like the sweet ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!   In another week, I'll be adding a little postscript to the story, a heart to heart between Ben and Bradley.

Date: 04/22/2019 - 12:59 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

Elizabeth, tackling a doppelganger story is quite a challenge. I would think it difficult, at times, to write such that the reader is not as confused as the characters in the story. You've done a good job in that respect. While I could sense Roy and Clem's confusion at times, I was confident I knew who the real Ben was.

I like Marian, and I hope she appears in another of your stories. I'd like to know about her.

Great use of your prompt title.



Author's Response:

Tracy, thank you for your kind review.  It is good to get feedback.

Date: 04/17/2019 - 09:55 am [Report This]
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