It's fun to see Ben take on an old advesary. and this time all his sons are involved in the plot. I won't say anything more, as I don't want to reveal the plotline.
A very intresting story I hope the three sons think up a question for their pa incase there is a next time. Poor Ben being put through all of that! great story telling really enjoyed the Dialogue between the boys.
That you tackled a difficult subject such as a 'doppelganger' I congratulate you. Some parts of the story for me didn't quite ring true or come across as feasable. But, as I don't want to give away too much in a review here maybe I will bring them up in the forum.
Stories such as this one can become confusing to readers, in my experience, but this story was well thought out - keeping it straight forward and not confusing at all.
It was nice to see some familiar characters mentioned in this one - I don't want to give too much away, so I won't mention names.
This is a very interesting take on the Ponderosa Prospects challenge, littlejoenice. Well done!
Thanks, Tracy. I had a bit of a hard time trying to make sure all the details stayed intact so that it would make sense, but it was worth it. I had a lot of fun!