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Title: Chapter 6 Reviewer: kbockrath Signed

Nicely done! I can picture all the characters with your story line. Even makes the original episode more cohesive when considering other storyline options.

Date: 05/04/2021 - 08:56 pm [Report This]
Title: Prologue Reviewer: Lisala Signed

I wanted to leave a review for this story even though I've yet to finish it (Spring brings too many chores and a too fast dreamtime once my head hits the pillow) because it is very, very good!  And my intentions are to finish as soon as possible (which, I will leave another then!  haha) 


Your writing is easy to read and quite powerful without being melodramatic.  The scenes with Adam and Lotta are entrancing.  Joe is fun and the whole gang comes across as so authentic and true to character.   I enjoy your action scenes and your dialogue and pretty much everything about your writing style.  


I will be reading more of your things!  




Author's Response:

Thank you for your compliments and kind words!  Readers are what makes writing worthwhile.  :-) 

Date: 05/06/2019 - 08:27 am [Report This]
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