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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

That's a nice exciting story.  You did a good job with those three words that you were given.  :)

Author's Response:

Thank you!  When I finally came up with the idea, I let out a big 'Whew!' LOL  

Date: 11/01/2018 - 01:06 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Pt29646 Signed

Wow! I didn’t realize Buck was the hero until the end. Well done!

Author's Response:

That was what I was hoping. Thanks for the review! 

Date: 10/29/2018 - 02:10 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Elizabeth Holmes Signed

Loved the story.  I was guessing the narrator until you described the black mane.  An enjoyable read.

Author's Response:

I had to stick in a few ltitle Thanks for reading and commenting! 

Date: 10/27/2018 - 10:59 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sharry Signed

And Buck steals the whole show!  I admit I didn't see that end coming.  I would say Ben totally gets it, however.  He's thankful in that humble way that Ben always is when something goes right that possibly shouldn't have.  It's probably hard to calculate how many near misses that man had with Joe before the boy reached adulthood. 

I'm not at all sure what I'd have done with the same three words.  You did very well.  I must also add that the image of Adam wearing a sweeping black cape is rather consuming.  I liked that - a lot. 

Thanks for a fun Halloween tale, Marla.    

Date: 10/26/2018 - 10:38 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Bejules Signed

Thank goodness Joe had "someone" looking out for him!  Great story and you did well with some difficult prompt words!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  For a challenge, it was ceretainly...a challenge!  lol 

Date: 10/26/2018 - 05:22 pm [Report This]
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