Reviews For Golden Hill
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Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tahoe Lee Signed

Sweet story.

Love to see the brothers laughing and having fun together.  The jokes they play on each other is adorable.

Really love your dialog...so real and genuine.  I like your portrayal of the Cartwrights as well.

The feeling of autumn, the colors and the title were all blended in nicely.

Good job!

Date: 10/27/2018 - 10:23 am [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: CowgirlAtHeart Signed

This is such a fun story, ansi! I love the description of autumn through Hoss's eyes at the beginning...I can see the golden trees and smell the air! When Adam and Joe get involved the story begins to remind me of a certain scene in "Springtime"...the comedy with the three brothers is terrific! :D

Date: 10/26/2018 - 03:11 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: manulanee Signed

An adorable story from beginning to ending!

I just thought it is so sad that many children nowadays either don't have the possibility to just play in the woods or aren't allowed to do so, because it might be "dangerous" or because their parents think they have "more important things" to do.

 

Date: 10/24/2018 - 03:00 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Sierras Signed

A fun brothers story.

Date: 10/23/2018 - 08:40 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: adamant Signed

Instead of another mud fight as in "Springtime", we have a leaf fight! One of the saddest things about growing up is losing the ability/permission of society, to "play" like a kid. But here is a chance for the brothers to lose all inhibitions and just be kids again. Enjoyable.

Date: 10/14/2018 - 05:33 pm [Report This]
Title: Chapter 1 Reviewer: Tracy Signed

"Golden Hill" takes me back to autumn in Pennsylvania and hours spent marveling at the rich hues of landscapes that only days before presented in shades of green.

Ansi, you certainly give your readers a "Hoss" we truly love, and anyone reading this story will agree, I'm sure. Nicely done! 



Author's Response:

Tracy, I love the change of seasons and the move from summer to autumn is beautiful.  I felt Hoss would feel the same, that my Hoss is lovable is only due to the man himself.  I mean all I did was replace grey mud with golden leaves.

Thank you, Trac, for your reading and reviewing. 

 

Date: 10/13/2018 - 10:07 am [Report This]
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