Wow! I didn't see this coming. The range in your story is surprising and very well thought out.
Fun loving and yet extremely deep.
It was great to see Hop Sing and his love for the C's on full display. He did so many things, behind the scenes, that no one ever knew about. This was a beautiful touch in your story.
His understanding about the events that had happened was very poignant.
His heart was full of compassion, and he provided a stability that the Cartwright family needed.
Very well done!